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Manuscript Editing Interview Part 1

November 21, 2016 By Lou

Last month I sat down with my editor, Kristen Hamilton of Kristen Corrects Inc., to discuss her background and her process when it comes to manuscript editing. By “sat down” I, of course, mean e-mails were sent and emoticons dispatched in lieu of drinks at the local pub. Still, laughs ensued and I appreciate her helping me understand more about her role in the process.

I cannot stress how important editing is to the writing process. Especially Kristen’s work on Signs of Portents and the rest of the Greystone series.

(For brevity’s sake I’ve toned down my sarcastic follow up questions to focus on the good stuff. You’re welcome.)

What is your background?

I always knew I wanted to do something in the writing/editing industry. I attribute this to the long hours my mom spent reading with me—usually 3-4 hours each day. We started with picture books when I was an infant and worked our way up to chapter books, and I eventually went on to start reading full-length novels (Dean Koontz novels were and still are my favorites) when I was in fourth or fifth grade.

By age 11, I was reading college-level materials. Reading was something I was always good at, and it made me feel accomplished to see how much stronger my reading skills were than my classmates’, so I kept at it. I’ve always been an introvert—quiet and shy—so books became my world. Instead of playing on the playground at recess, I’d sit and read a book. After school, I’d read. I devoured everything I could get my hands on.

My confidence was further bolstered when my entire fourth grade class took a writing test, and I was the only one who passed. When I was in the ninth grade, the teacher made photocopies of an essay I had written to show the other students “how to write a proper essay.” Teachers constantly encouraged me, and being singled out like this gave me the enthusiasm to keep going.

How does one prepare to become an editor?

Originally my goal was to be a journalist, and to write for the newspaper. When I was in middle school and high school, I was on the school newspaper staff, but it was less than what I had anticipated it to be. I didn’t enjoy coming up with story ideas—I found it difficult and tedious. But when I had a rough draft—boy, that was fun, editing it and seeing what I could do to improve it. Once the words were already on paper, I excelled.

By the time college rolled around, I was still trying to pursue the path of being a writer, even though a small part of me knew it didn’t quite fit. I took creative writing workshops, but I enjoyed reading and critiquing others’ work much more than I did writing my own stories. It was here, as I watched the teacher critique others’ stories with the class, that I began to learn what to look for when editing—character development, plot arc, believability of dialogue…

How did you start out as an editor?

I was working in fast food all through college. In the spring of 2012, I snagged a job at a car dealership writing descriptions about the vehicles. I was so excited—this was the start of my writing career, I just knew it! But working in a cubicle wasn’t what I thought it was going to be. I didn’t enjoy the set 8-to-5 hours and there was never enough for me to do. In fact, I ended up writing the car descriptions so fast that I ran out of work. They transferred me to a department that needed some extra hands—accounting. (Did I mention I failed my college math classes?) I ended up being at the accounting department for 2 weeks before they laid me off. I had only been there for 6 months and felt like a huge failure.

So there I was, sitting on the couch, unemployed. My boyfriend (now husband) threw a book in my lap: Freelancing for Dummies. I had nothing better to do, so I read it.

Two days later, I started Kristen Corrects. I started out at Odesk, now Upwork. The wages there are pitiful and most of your competition is outsourced work—think places like India, the Philippines, etc. I only worked a few jobs to get a few pieces of work for my portfolio and some testimonials. Then I created www.kristencorrects.com. I built up my SEO rankings, so if you type in “manuscript editor” on Google, I come up on the first page. My career is developing now that I have a ton of return and word-of-mouth clients, which has given me a landslide of clientele. It’s been a lot of hard work, but I’m incredibly passionate about what I do.

Parts 2 and 3 of our chat is coming next week.

Thanks for reading.

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Filed Under: Editing Tagged With: editing process, Kristen Corrects Inc, Kristen Hamilton, manuscript editing

Goodreads Giveaway Ends Today

November 17, 2016 By Lou

Today marks the end of the Goodreads giveaway! A great experience watching people get excited at their chance to win a signed paperback copy of Signs of Portents. If you haven’t checked it out and entered yet do so now before the end of today.

Last Chance to Enter the Goodreads Giveaway!

Winners will be notified by November 23rd and I will be sending out the copies promptly. I can’t wait for the feedback from the winners. Definitely looking forward to bringing more people into the world of Greystone before next month’s release of Resurrectionists.

Signs of Portents Goodreads GiveawayFeel free to drop me a line, both through here, Goodreads and my Author Central page over at Amazon. I am always available to answer any questions about the books. No spoilers allowed though. (Everyone dies. Wait, no, that isn’t how it ends. Is it?)

This has been a lot of fun putting together. So much so that I think I’ll be doing it again come January for Tales from Portents. A nice treat leading up to its release on February 17th.

For those unable to wait for their copy feel free to snag a free preview of the novel at the link below.

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A short one for today. Only thirteen days left in November. And a lot of The Medusa Coin left to write.

Good luck all around!

Thanks for reading.

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The Drawback of Writing a Book Series

November 14, 2016 By Lou

I wrote about what makes writing (and reading) a book series so appealing last week. This week I want to go the opposite track and discuss the cons of working in the confines of a series.

Seeing a book series through to the end.

There is a level of expectation when writing a series. Especially to the reader. When an author dives into a series there is the belief that they will see it through to the end. Look at the Harry Potter series. Imagine that J.K. Rowling decided halfway through The Goblet of Fire that she needed to work on A Casual Vacancy next instead of starting the fifth book of everyone’s favorite wizard? Imagine the outcry from fandom for that little decision? Think what Warner Brothers would have done if they caught up with the books when making the films?

Writing a series can be freeing in some respects. I wrote about them previously. The level of comfort in living within an existing world. But what if you discover a new world in the telling? What if you feel the pull to something new halfway into your narrative (this being a multi-book narrative not the middle of a single book)? Do you walk away from your current series and the fans of such work to create something new? Or are you stuck?

Greystone’s first “cycle”

I’ve thought about this for some time. By the time the fifth book (three novels and two short story collections) of the Greystone series comes out I will have spent over two years of my life working on nothing else. If I take into account the previous attempts to put together Signs of Portents over the last decade it is more like four years. Quite an extensive portion of time.

And that’s not the end of the story. Not by a long shot. But I’ve created small windows in the narrative to give myself time to create other worlds. Build other stories or series. And then come back to Portents, Loren and Soriya for another couple of years.

Not every writer has that luxury. The pressure of continually working within a specific series can be confining when other worlds beckon.

Spinning your book series in circles

Having a series is a great idea in theory. Growing characters. Seeing them through a journey unable to be contained within a single work. But what if the plot of a book series takes precedent over the growth of those characters?

Excuse the return to the Harry Potter world but my daughter keeps pulling it off the shelf for some reason and it’s stuck in my head. Think about it though. What if Rowling focused so fully on the return of Voldemort she forgot that Harry, Ron and Hermione were living, breathing characters that needed to evolve with each book? What if she knew where they ended up but it was built out so far in the future that she ended up stunting their growth to keep the journey going for book after book?

Spinning in circles is a real problem and finding the hook for a character for their third or thirteenth appearance can be a real challenge. If the character has nothing to strive for, if it is forced upon both them and the reader, is there really a need to continue the series?

A lack of focus

Much like the questions asked above with a book series, there is the fear of losing focus over the life of the series. I’ve read quite a few comics in my day. (You might be surprised to learn that. Don’t be.) Something I always find with writer’s that overstay their welcome on a title is that the focus turns away from the main characters completely for a supporting character that has more room for growth.

Reader’s hate this. They don’t pick up a Jack Reacher book to read about Joe Schmoe in the background that seems to pop up every other chapter. They want to know what the hell Jack Reacher is going to do next. (I totally was going to bring up Harry Potter again. One track mind today.)

If the writer can’t find something interesting to say about their main characters and rely on supporting or even new players to showcase the world of the book series then maybe it is time to button it up. Maybe there has been enough mileage on a single concept.

These are things I constantly worry about, toy with when developing a story into a series to make sure there is enough meat there to keep the reader coming back for more. It is part of the reason for the break from Greystone after book five, to make sure there is something there for the next “cycle” for Soriya, Loren and the rest of the cast. The plot is there to be sure but that is only half the battle. The characters are the rest.

Readers know this and ultimately they deserve the best with each and every installment.

Thanks for reading.

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Filed Under: Greystone, Writing Tagged With: book series, Greystone, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling, Jack Reacher

Writing Update – November 10, 2016

November 10, 2016 By Lou

I like to take stock on where I am with my work and I feel it’s important to share that with you here. Every two weeks you can find out what I’m currently writing and what I’ve been reading.

Reminder Alert: Only one week left to enter the Goodreads Giveaway for a chance to win a signed copy of Signs of Portents! Plenty of time left to spread the word and get people excited for the book!

Writing

NaNoWriMo is in full swing and I am chained to my folding table in the basement to crank out the second full length novel in the Greystone series. The Medusa Coin is a story I’ve been waiting to tell for way too long. To have the opportunity to maximize my productivity during this month long sprint is incredible.

I’m looking to complete the entire first draft for the NaNoWriMo challenge this year and have been plugging away diligently to make it happen. As of this writing I am 30 chapters in at a word count of 34,042. It definitely takes some getting used to being able to write almost full time compared to my normal schedule (the ever fading nap time). Very happy I’ve taken the challenge this year to test out how things will be once my two wonderful munchkins hit their school years though I do miss daylight (Not that there’s much of it to enjoy these days.)

You can read about my NaNoWriMo experience as well as some tips to prepare and survive the grueling month over at The Write Life starting next week.

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The line edit just came back from my brilliantly talented editor, Kristen Hamilton and I will be digging through her notes over the next two weeks before the proofreading phase begins. February is right around the corner so I plan to make this my full priority once I survive November. I’m looking forward to sharing this project with you. Very surprised at how well it came together considering its origins.

Kristen was nice enough to entertain some questions – okay, a lot of questions – about her process. I plan to share them over the next couple of weeks. A nice primer for how much she brings to the table as an editor and how to make the most of the collaboration.

Reading

Unfortunately, with more writing time the reading portion of my day has ground to a halt. I have been lucky enough to get more reading time with my three year old so if you’re looking for some scintillating reviews of Dora the Explorer or Pete the Cat I’d be glad to share them. Just not here. (As long as my daughter enjoys them, that’s all that matters, right?)

Thanks for reading.

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Why Book Series Are So Appealing

November 7, 2016 By Lou

We live in a serial storytelling world. From the endless supply of sequels in Hollywood to the season length plotlines in our favorite television show to our favorite book series, we can’t escape them. And who wants to, right?

When I sat down to figure out the first project I would be releasing, Signs of Portents circled to the top. At the start of things the book was a one off. Tell the story and get the hell out of there. Move onto something else. Now it is a full blown book series. (Or will be after February’s release of Tales from Portents.)

And that’s a good thing.

Here are three reasons why book series are so appealing to readers and writers:

Creating stronger attachments.

Book series create stronger attachments. Think about it. You want to know what happens next in your favorite series. I recently read the Bill Hodges trilogy by Stephen King. The author could have left things alone after the initial installment of Mr. Mercedes but the character of Hodges stuck with him. Finders Keepers, while focusing on another narrative for two thirds of the book before pulling Hodges back into things did eventually create the through-line necessary for the “trilogy” to play out.

By the time I finished the second in the series I had pre-ordered a copy of the third. I had to know what happened to everyone involved in the story. How Bill Hodges would win the day. I felt compelled to follow Brady Hartsfield’s madness.

Covering all that in one book is possible but then it is done. Over. Finished. Not always a detriment and there are quite a few people out there that would argue that is all that is necessary. Put together a solid novel and let it out there. Beginning, middle and end. But sometimes more can be just as satisfying.

Seeing characters through more. The journey.

I’ve always been more of a television person than a film viewer. I prefer the journey of a character over more than one situation. It is more preferable for me to witness the fallout, the slow growth than the shift within the confines of a two hour movie. The same applies for people in love with book series.

What did they do next? Where do they go from here?

These are questions that I find myself fascinated with when putting together a story. Maybe it’s a weakness of mine. Maybe I have trouble closing out a single work because I’m afraid to end something so definitively. The journey, however, has always been the fun of it for me.

Characters, much like reality, go through more than one life changing situation. Each one shapes us as people, and as readers. That is where the effectiveness of a book series lies. How is each circumstance handled differently and why? How the protagonist evolves, sometimes against our better wishes, is something we have to see. Those expectations, that thrill at seeing the next chapter of a character’s existence is thrilling for readers.

It’s all about comfort.

For both readers and writers of a book series. Comfort in sitting down with old friends. Comfort in knowing certain tropes of the narrative. John McClane is going to be covered in blood and saying Yippee-ki-yay-something or other… Loren is always going to piss someone off with his attitude and his need to snap his gum at the absolute worst time. Soriya is always going to need to fight. Always.

We love that about series. The absolutes. It’s like wearing a warm blanket.

For writing especially. Book series offer the writer a break from designing every element and building world after world. Portents exists now. It is laid out. The Central Precinct exists. It has rules to it. Six floors. Loren’s office is on the second. Rules.

Even the cover has rules to it now. A style to it that should stay in keeping for the whole series. Because of that there is an ease in entering the world instead of trepidation at every turn. Should there always be something new to add to the world, helping it evolve over the course of the series? Absolutely. Should there be old standby’s, callbacks and nods to previous books in the series for the reader’s benefit? Definitely.

What do you prefer?

Do you prefer to follow a specific series or are you more in the vein of a one-and-done reader? What is it about either one that appeals to you? What do you look for in a series?

Drop me a line on social media or directly. I’d love to hear your thoughts.

Thanks for reading.

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Filed Under: Greystone, Writing Tagged With: book series, Die Hard, Portents, serial storytelling, Stephen King

Resurrectionists – First Look

November 3, 2016 By Lou

These are my favorite moments. When something finally comes together enough to show it off to you, gentle reader. Welcome to Resurrectionists, A Greystone Tale.

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When I put together Tales from Portents I knew I needed a centerpiece. There had to be a focal point to the collection, a larger work holding all of the pieces in place and making it a full work instead of disparate threads.

Resurrectionists is that centerpiece.

When Signs of Portents opens, Detective Greg Loren is being pulled back into the city. He is haunted by the mistakes of his past. This story shows his fall and the reasons behind his leaving for Chicago. It explains the role a man named Standish played in these events and also brings to light the true meaning behind the mistakes and regrets that plague his decisions throughout Signs of Portents.

 

Why a Greystone Tale?

This is part of Tales from Portents, coming in February 2017. In fact, it is the first story in the collection. So why offer it separately? It felt important to me. A true prelude to Signs while also bridging some of the themes being explored in the next full length novel following Tales.

The story also allows people a glimpse at the world of Greystone without having to invest to much of their time or hard earned cash.

Speaking of the financial expense…

How much is this gem going to run you? For subscribers to my e-mail list not a cent. Sign up for my e-mail newsletter, a charming missive sent out monthly, and receive this wonderful ebook for FREE.

It will be available on the ebook retailers websites as well. A slight price tag involved so the free alternative is the better option. To me anyway, but I listen to myself babble for hours everyday.

The details, man. Give us the details!

Resurrectionists hits the digital shelves during the latter half of December. I haven’t nailed down a precise date. It depends on a couple things coming together and a few late nights on my part, but by the end of the year it will be available.

For those already on the e-mail list it will be sent to you directly upon availability.

I can’t wait to share this with you and it should give a nice primer for what to expect in Tales from Portents. It was a lot of fun to put together.

Thanks for reading.

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