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July 9, 2019 By Lou

Want a free copy of my upcoming releases? Join the launch team today!

Explain this launch team thing to me…

It all comes down to reviews. No matter what anyone tells you, they are the gold standard for social promotion. There is nothing better than a reader’s opinion of your book to show the world that they should take a chance on your product. I can scream from the mountains that Greystone is a phenomenal series but I might be slightly biased…

Might be.

So, in exchange for a free copy of my book all I ask in return is an honest review on Amazon, Goodreads, and everywhere else you feel comfortable leaving one the week the book is released. Easy peasy.

What does a review entail?

A sentence or two at their most basic. Overall impression and whether or not you think others will enjoy the story told. You can go further into the plot, the craft behind the work, but that’s completely up to you.

The schedule this year.

It’s a little crazy, to be honest. I try to give a month or two of lead time for reading and preparing for the launch. The schedule is a little tighter than I prefer for this year but I’ll do everything I can to make it work for you.

DSA Season One, Book One – The Clearing launches in early October. Advance reader copies will be available starting September 8th.

Greystone-In-Training Book One – Hammer and Anvil also launches in October but will be near the end of the month. ARC’s will be sent out starting September 23rd.

DSA Season One, Book Two – Promethean launches mid-November. Advance reader copies will be available starting October 1st.

From there things get a little nebulous in terms of details. Faster readers can continue with the DSA series right through Book 6 (releases in April 2020).

If you’re excited about the new projects and ready to read, there’s no better way than through the launch team. It’s a good community and always a treat to hear the reactions from readers.

Email me at lou@loupaduano.com to join today!

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Beta Readers Needed for The Medusa Coin

March 13, 2017 By Lou

Calling all beta readers! Calling all beta readers! The Medusa Coin is DONE.

beta readersQuite possibly the most difficult couple of months since launching the series but completely worth the time and aggravation. When I sat down with my initial outline everything appeared to be very straightforward with a clear path from beginning to end.

WRONG.

Quite a few additions and deletions have been made to this manuscript over the last two and a half months. At one point I thought the whole draft would need rewriting – not my best day. I’m glad to be out the other side of this one and happy to share it with a few select readers willing to offer their thoughts on the draft.

The importance of beta readers.

I’ve spoken to this before and I stand by my earlier statements on the subject. Beta readers are a crucial part of the editing process. Much as I love keeping all the secrets and holding back the surprises of a new novel until launch day, it doesn’t quite work if the final product doesn’t live up to the hype.

Suffice it say, I’d love to hear your thoughts on The Medusa Coin. This story has been with me for a LONG time and I have definitely felt the weight of my own expectations bearing down on me. I want this book to be top notch and you can help.

How to become a beta reader?

E-mail me at lou@loupaduano.com or through the oft-mentioned contact page. Or message me directly on social media. Let me know the best way to send you the file for your review.

What am I looking for exactly?

There are a number of areas actually but all feedback is welcome. Some specific areas of interest are:

  1. Pace – Does each chapter go at a good clip? Do you feel like you’re wading through a swamp or rushing through the rapids?
  2. Dialogue – Too much? Too little? Do you ever lose track of who is speaking?
  3. Story Logic – THE BIG ONE. Does the book make sense? Do connections come out of left field or is there enough information laid throughout to understand the chain of events that lead the main characters through the narrative?
  4. Flow – Not only chapter to chapter but paragraph to paragraph. Is a better transition needed?
  5. Perspective – Is there a random shift of perspective in the middle of the chapter that isn’t noted by a break? Do you ever feel like one character is lost in the mix at any time in the narrative?
  6. The villain – This was definitely an area I wanted to improve upon after Signs of Portents. Is the antagonist developed enough? Do they get enough time to shine?
  7. Repetition – Another area of concern from Signs. Character arcs are very important to me and background thoughts tend to string their main conflict along throughout the narrative. Does it ever become too repetitive in the story? Does it need to back off during certain scenes and allow the action to progress?
  8. Awkward sentences/descriptions – Are there points in the novel that tripped you up? Sentences you had to read several times over in order to understand an action occurring?

What am I not looking for?

  1. Grammar lessons. I suck at it, I know. It’s a fact of life. If you want to mark up the entire piece and save my wonderful editor the hassle later on, have at it. Telling me my grammar skills blow will not help and brings me to my final note –
  2. Vague assistance. Specifics are needed to improve the work. Telling me something doesn’t work in Chapter Forty-Three is great but I need to know what it is in detail. Not enough dialogue? A slow paragraph that didn’t add anything to the scene? Be as specific as you can, please!

Beta Readers Deadline – April 20th.

It’s not as far off as you think and it gives me ten days to work through everyone’s notes before I pass it off to my editor.

How to mark it up:

The easiest way to mark up the text is to highlight and make notes on your computer but typing up a separate document/e-mail with a list of your notes for me to go through when you are set also works.

If you have any questions please do not hesitate to ask.

I greatly appreciate all of your help in this process. My goal is to make the best book possible and I can’t do that alone. Thanks to all of you in advance.

And thanks for reading!

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Beta-Readers – A Critical Step in the Process

September 8, 2016 By Lou

There are many different paths to take when writing, many different ways to create, to build. Just as there are an infinite number of ways to publish your work – traditionally, independently, exclusively with one retailer, only digitally, etc. Certain parts of the process are critical no matter how you go about bringing your voice into the world. Instances that should not be skipped, including the use of beta readers.

What are beta readers?

Beta reader tests your manuscript (by reading it), and tells you about the ‘bugs’ so you can improve its readability, its usefulness and even its saleability. – Belinda Pollard

Sounds pretty important, right? It really is. For as much as you believe in your book, as much blood, sweat and probably more blood (damn paper cuts) has been poured into creating this fantastic manuscript you’re going to miss things. Hopefully, it won’t be major structural issues. (Wait, they start in Cincinnati on Monday at eight in the morning and end up in Los Angeles just six hours later? Someone didn’t do so well at word problems…) But if there are, it is better to catch them now before that first proof comes back or, God forbid, that first negative review on Amazon.

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Reaching out to Beta Readers

Where in the process does this fit? That is your choice. For me, I prefer to ask a small circle of readers before I send the manuscript to my editor. I prefer a fully polished book to come back from my editor, something that I can read over a few more times, make minor tweaks and then submit for publication.

The most efficient time for reader feedback is prior to editing so you can pivot and readjust where necessary to make the work stronger. It also helps so your editor isn’t looking at the manuscript in its rawest form. There have been other eyeballs on the piece to call you out on any areas you phoned in or didn’t quite nail.

When I reach out to beta readers I present the work as I would to an agent (albeit a little more casually). I introduce the product and am upfront about the timeline involved. If I only have a month for feedback and need to make a pass through the work at the end then I can only give three weeks to my readers. They need to know that right away. No surprises here. I also ask them to respond as to whether or not they have the time (or inclination) to read the book at this point. That gives me a clear headcount and I am completely aware of how many e-mails I should be receiving by the deadline given.

Ask questions.

During my initial approach with my small circle of readers I also prepare a list of questions. I typically put this together while self-editing the project. These start with all encompassing queries about the piece as a whole. Did Soriya’s arc work for you? Was there sufficient change from start to finish? Did it make sense?

Then it turns more specific. Was there enough tension in the conversation between Mentor and Soriya in chapter nine? Did I lose you at all in chapter seven when the villain turned out to be a fox? Does it make sense for Peter Parker to perform a dance number in the middle of Spider-Man 3? (The answer to that last one is NO. NEVER. Sam Raimi needed a few more beta readers…)

Asking questions lets your beta readers know there are specific areas you are concerned about. Maybe you don’t know everything there is to know about the bureaucracy of a police department so you ask your group (hopefully with someone knowledgeable in this area) to look over the scenes relating to this topic closely to point out any omissions or inaccuracies that are too glaring and pull a reader from the story. (What do you mean Loren can’t shoot another cop in the middle of the station and get away with it? Balls!)

The Best Beta Readers

The very best people to ask to read your painstakingly created masterpiece are those that can add something to the work. A close friend that loves science fiction might be more in tune with the tropes of the genre to let you know when something doesn’t work in your space opera. Another fan of thrillers might pick up on your killer by chapter four instead of when they stand revealed in chapter sixty-four. That might be a problem.

You want different voices. And you want voices that aren’t only there to give you encouragement, though some would be nice. Writing is a very lonely gig so some warm, cuddly love for your words is always appreciated but not at the expense of the final product.

Beta readers need to push the manuscript and the writer to be better.

Looking for a few good readers.

If you are interested in becoming a beta reader on my next project, feel free to shoot me an e-mail. I am always looking for feedback.

Where to find Beta Readers? – Check out Goodreads for their Beta Reader Group.

Thanks for reading.

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