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Spectral Advocate Author Commentary 5

November 6, 2023 By Lou

The Spectral Advocate author commentary continues this week with a look at Megan Daniels, the sinister threat behind the Specter in the novel. Whoops. Guess I should have led with the SPOILER WARNING!

Building the threat of Megan Daniels

Figuring out the villain for a story is one of the pure joys of writing. There are few tasks more gratifying than developing someone multi-faceted, yet truly twisted at heart. With Spectral Advocate, I knew the physical threat would always be the Specter. Nothing would come close to that level of terror.

But I wanted to try anyway.

On a purely psychological level, I wanted Megan Daniels to be a totally sympathetic character who simply goes too far. We’ve all been pushed into a corner, but how often do we push back to the point of, oh, let’s say, murder? (Don’t answer that, you’ll only incriminate yourself!)

Megan has a legit beef with Abigail Winslow/Hunt. She abandoned Megan’s husband the night of his death. If she had been present, they both might be dead, sure, but there was always the chance of their survival as well.

The first interaction

It’s still a favorite scene of mine in the book. Okay, there are quite a few in this one (the comic book store, of course, as well as the battle in Ben’s bedroom, to name a couple) but introducing Megan Daniels was a challenge I enjoyed. She needed to exude innocence and did so by leaning on the widow aspect of her life. She yearns for her husband, but doesn’t come off as needy, simply lonely due to the tragedy of Steven’s death.

I was worried about this scene. The reason was simple: I didn’t have another one with a different potential killer. Everything fell on Megan Daniels, and I was worried people would see right through the chapter and know she was the killer.

Every draft brought with it more desire to layer in red herrings. A boss, a co-worker, a secret lover, yet everything felt like a distraction from the main plot. Her inability to let go of the past mirrored that of both Cal and Ben, which I felt was more crucial to explore than anything else in the novel.

After the usual back and forth with myself, I left it alone and hoped no one saw through to the end too quickly.

Megan Daniels revealed

I’ve listed a couple favorite scenes in the book already, but the end of Chapter Twenty-Three remains one of the best images in the entire season. I still close my eyes and see Megan’s dead eyes staring at Ben and Cal, while pointing toward the door with her husband’s ghost hovering overhead.

“Show our guests out, would you, dear?”

It still brings me chills.

Influences

I might have mentioned this in the past, but of all Peter Jackson’s incredible work on the screen, my favorite film of his remains The Frighteners.

Jeffrey Combs, Michael J. Fox, Jake Busey, Dee Wallace, and so many other incredible talents worked on this movie. Dee Wallace, especially, helped bring Megan Daniels to life in Spectral Advocate. Not so much for the crazed mania she portrayed as Patricia Bradley, but with how attached she remained to Johnny Bartlett. They could not be apart, and that aspect I felt was key for Megan in Spectral Advocate.

It’s a freaking phenomenal movie. I might be the only one on the planet that thinks so. (Or so my wife believes…) You should check it out.

Next:

The never-before-seen bonus story I wrote back in 2015 that delves into Cal Cooper’s visit to Bethesda.

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Spectral Advocate Author Commentary 4

October 30, 2023 By Lou

Welcome back to another look at Spectral Advocate. As with the other author commentary pieces, there will be spoilers so watch out! This time I’m talking about the subplot threads in the book and the constantly changing team dynamics.

Team Dynamics

I’ve always said I like to play with the team when it comes to the DSA. For me, there is nothing more fun than seeing how the main cast handles their interactions with each other and with the randoms they come across. It is infinitely more satisfying to write a Lincoln/Sullivan exchange than yet another briefing from Zac to the entire department, because those types of exchanges don’t occur regularly, so they have to pack a lot of punch.

In my mind, I’ve always viewed the DSA as starring Ben Riley and Morgan Dunleavy. Everyone else is a supporting character behind these two leads. They are my Mulder and Scully. Everything centers around them.

Looking back on Season One, I find it funny to see that, though they might be my leads for the DSA, they really weren’t together a whole helluva lot. My personal memory imagined them together constantly, yet reading through the first season, only Promethean so far has had the two of them as primaries on a case.

It’s weird how the mind remembers things.

This was, of course, by design to some extent. In The Bridge, I needed the cast isolated and dealing with their own problems. Spectral Advocate, though, opened the door for Ben to feed off someone new. (Not to mention someTHING new as discussed last time.) I thought it was important, again, to keep Ben isolated especially in light of Abigail Winslow’s clear deception with the DSA. She was brought in to spy on Ben, but he couldn’t possibly know by whom.

That level of distrust made it easier for him to want to handle things solo.

But what about Morgan?

I’m not going to delve into her sexy time with Zac. (That’s for a different forum.)

Her time tracking down Lincoln, though, is something I thought was very important to develop for the series. Lincoln, since Promethean, has been M.I.A. in his search for the Witness. For me, subplots work best when there are touchstones to the main plot and/or main cast. You’ll see that again during Season Two, Book Three.

Bringing Lincoln and Morgan together again cemented the importance of his search and everything he had learned up to that point. He is carrying this massive weight, knowing what the Witness has seen with the DSA and the threat against them. Instead of questioning that knowledge, Lincoln hangs onto it like a lifeline.

Motivation was the key.

His motivation comes from grief over Ruth’s loss.

Morgan’s comes from somewhere else completely. Her rage at the Witness for Bellbrook puts her at odds with Lincoln immediately, something she never thought possible.

I really wanted to pull at the DSA cast. With each book, I want them questioning everything, even themselves. That’s where the true heart of the series comes from–through these relentless tests and situations no one could possibly understand.

Morgan, blinded by rage for the Witness’ crimes, can’t support Lincoln’s decisions. And Lincoln, lost to grief, can’t see any other way to move forward. The Witness is his only path in his eyes. That separation really sold the tension between them in the junkyard scenes.

Unintended consequences

Every choice needs weight. The scenes developed in these subplots were opportunities to give the cast a chance at redemption and to show the reader why some didn’t take that chance.

Building these moments, layering in the tension and the conflict behind the main plot, are some of my fondest memories from Season One. I wracked my brain with each one, wanting more and more from the characters, and they absolutely delivered.

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Spectral Advocate Author Commentary 3

October 23, 2023 By Lou

The author commentary for Spectral Advocate continues with a look at the strange paranormal angle used in the book. Here is your warning for spoilers!

Diving into the paranormal

The DSA was designed to handle scientific anomalies. That has always been the basis of the series, and when I look to build a new book that is where I start. With Spectral Advocate, I wanted to upend the board to do something completely different.

Why? A few reasons, really.

The first was discussed last week when talking about Cal Cooper and the potential spinoff available to tell his tale. I didn’t want to work on a second series dealing with something the DSA should be handling. It needed to be unique to justify its existence.

Another reason was to take the series out of its comfort zone. Tossing characters into new situations is fun and exciting. It creates a level of tension that maybe you haven’t been able to generate or builds a new layer into the character.

That was the angle I took with Ben being thrown into this ghost hunt/murder mystery. He is a cop at heart, using logic to handle problems. How can he do any of that when dealing with the dead? Tossing Ben into the deep end of a new world was an absolute selling point to me for that very reason. Seeing how he had to justify actions taken by the dead made the book for me.

The final and best reason? I really like ghost stories. Which is strange, since scary movies frighten the hell out of me and I can’t watch them. But something about that world speaks to me. I really hope to dive deeper into it with Cal someday.

Was it too much?

I always worry about this. True, the final decisions are mine to make, but I am always looking at the series from a reader’s perspective. Was the paranormal nature of the story too far from the beaten path? Absolutely. Was that the point of the book for Ben and for Cal? Absolutely.

Ben’s choice over all others.

It came down to Ben, as it should. He could have walked away and let the police handle things. He could have told Cal to get the hell away from him. Instead, he looked to solve the murder of a woman who was spying on him. That really helped define Ben for me. His drive for answers despite knowing NOTHING about anything (seriously, ever) makes him so relatable. He simply tries to help because he can.

The truth about the title

I love the title. It might be the best one I’ve ever managed to come up with. Was it always Spectral Advocate?

Nope.

It was… WAIT FOR IT…

Ghosts.

Super original, right? So glad I took another stab at it.

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Spectral Advocate Author Commentary 2

October 16, 2023 By Lou

The author commentary for Spectral Advocate continues! This installment takes a closer look at the newest addition to the DSA’s world: Cal Cooper. SPOILER WARNING is in effect!

Who is Cal Cooper?

I love guest stars. Watching television dramas growing up, it was always a treat when the main character(s) were able to play off someone new–some guest to their world who brought with them a unique problem to be solved.

Cal Cooper was my attempt to really sell the wider world to the reader. With all the focus on scientific anomalies and government conspiracies, Spectral Advocate allowed me to open the doors to new ideas and more bizarre threats.

Cal is the Spectral Advocate, a lawyer with the uncanny ability to look through the veil to see the ghostly plane. That dichotomy really sold the character for me. Here was a guy working firmly in the natural world. He’s rational, believing firmly in the law, yet there’s this other side of things. He can see ghosts and interact with them.

The first potential spin-off

When I originally put together my plan for the DSA, I did so with the intention of creating a broader universe of stories. DSA was the spine for this shared universe. Each season I hoped to introduce some element that might spin out from the DSA into something new.

Cal Cooper, Spectral Advocate, was the first. His story may start here (what will eventually – hopefully – be considered Book 0 of his tale) but there is so much more to tell.

What other spin-off’s are in the works? Look no further than Season Two, Book Three. (Hint, hint)

One of my favorite characters

I tell people all the time about my love for Cal Cooper. His story has been locked in my brain for almost a decade now. One of these days I’m going to get the chance to write it all down.

Why haven’t I?

Not enough people have reached out. I swore I would not write the first Spectral Advocate novel until a certain number of people demanded more.

Six books of his series are scripted, if you can believe that. They have been since 2016. Every once in a while, I get the itch and read through them. They still hold up, even after all these years.

Maybe someday I’ll be able to bring his world back and finish his story. You tell me if that’s something you would enjoy.

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Spectral Advocate Author Commentary 1

October 9, 2023 By Lou

Welcome to the author commentary for Spectral Advocate, the fourth book in the DSA series. I love giving background info on my books, so if there is ever anything you want covered, please don’t hesitate to reach out. SPOILER WARNING is in effect, as I will be discussing what happens in the book.

Let the author commentary begin!

The opening sequence

I’m going to be honest right now. Looking back through Spectral Advocate over the last few days, I did not remember the opening chapter. AT ALL. It actually surprised me that it was there. I always thought the story opened with the scream from Abigail Winslow’s apartment. There’s a reason for that:

That was how the book started in the original draft.

Ben’s childhood, his fear of ghosts, did not exist in that original rendition of the story. Even most of the second chapter didn’t, as the scream was the initial line in the book, and everything ran from there.

So where did the flashback scene come from and why keep it?

If you’ve read the book, you are no doubt aware of the role Ben’s father plays in the background. The big reveal at the end, where Cal Cooper has been seeing Ben’s father this whole time repeating the same phrase of “I’m sorry” over and over again doesn’t get the impact it deserves without the opening sequence.

Symmetry gets thrown around a lot when putting together a novel. Circling back to the beginning definitely strengthens a narrative on a thematic level. That was the reason behind the childhood flashback. Not only would it introduce Ben’s fear of ghosts, something he would have to face in the climax of the novel, but it also played on the dynamic between Ben and his father.

Kenneth Riley has been a figure mentioned briefly previously. This was a chance to build on that, and also foreshadow the revelations to come in Dark Impulses. Even Ben’s conversation with Cal in Chapter Sixteen doesn’t play the same without the flashback at the start of the novel, so that was why it came about and why it stayed.

“I’m sorry.”

I love this moment. It’s nice and ambiguous, leaving the reader to draw their own conclusions about what Kenneth is apologizing for. What has he done to his son that he now haunts him with nothing but regret?

The answers might be in Dark Impulses, or is there something more to it? I’m not saying anything on that front. You’ll have to wait and see.

The better opening

This is something I’ve been thinking about since revisiting the book for this commentary. Overall, I think the original opening focusing strictly on the scream and the situation was probably stronger. Could the flashback have been included somewhere else? Maybe while Ben is waiting for his coffee across from his apartment?

These are the kinds of questions that keep me up at night. I could second guess myself to death over every detail included, or erased, or revised, from the books, but then nothing would ever get published.

The flashback served a purpose and set the tone of the novel. That held its own importance, and I’m glad to have it in the book.

Next up: Cal Cooper!

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The Bridge Author Commentary 7

August 7, 2023 By Lou

The final installment of The Bridge author commentary has arrived. To close out, I’m talking about the special bonus file attached to the book, The Grissom File. SPOILER WARNING!

The Grissom File

The origin of The Grissom File was very much in line with those mentioned previously. There was the diary entry for The Clearing and the deleted scene for Promethean. Every book had some form of bonus involved, but when the books were restructured from weekly/monthly releases to novels, those first two instances folded into the books to flesh out certain details.

Not so with The Bridge.

At the end of the novel, Ben Riley opens up The Grissom File and begins to see the events that led to the demise of Jacob Grissom. I thought it would be fun to show that to the reader. I can’t stress the importance of The Grissom File. Clues and motivations really come to light in the document, and you really gain a level of insight into the characters. I know I certainly did.

Figuring out how it would be structured was an absolute blast, with the redacted links and the timestamps on the opening dossier.

The transcripts of Hollis’ interviews with the team were what really made this bonus special to me. Every single page was from the original draft back in 2015, if you can believe that. Sure, there was a tweak here or there but, for the most part, everything stayed true to the original vision of the file.

How the script influenced future drafts

As I mentioned above, the transcripts proved to be quite informative. Each character showcased brought in a level of personality not really seen before in my earliest drafts.

This was originally just an exercise to get into the characters’ heads and figure out who they were as people. Putting them under the spotlight in the tense aftermath of Grissom’s death helped me learn what made each of them tick and what their priorities truly were.

When Zac realizes it was Metcalf’s fault what happened, that cemented what kind of role he was going to have in the series. When Ruth clammed up and asked for her glass of water, it said something about her failure to lead following Grissom’s demise. Each member of the team brought something unique to the file, and their characterization grew from these interactions for every scene since.

Why isn’t the file included in the paperback?

I wanted it to be. I really did. But I had no clue how to format it. Multiple attempts were made, but none succeeded.

The Grissom File is included in the DSA: Complete First Season box set. That was challenging in itself.

I hope readers do go back and check out the file online, though. It really came together nicely, and they are some of my favorite exchanges in the opening season.

That’s a wrap on The Bridge.

Spectral Advocate is up next. If there is something specific you were curious about in any of the books, be sure to shoot me a message/email/telegraph/smoke signal and let me know.

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