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Spectral Advocate Author Commentary 1

October 9, 2023 By Lou

Welcome to the author commentary for Spectral Advocate, the fourth book in the DSA series. I love giving background info on my books, so if there is ever anything you want covered, please don’t hesitate to reach out. SPOILER WARNING is in effect, as I will be discussing what happens in the book.

Let the author commentary begin!

The opening sequence

I’m going to be honest right now. Looking back through Spectral Advocate over the last few days, I did not remember the opening chapter. AT ALL. It actually surprised me that it was there. I always thought the story opened with the scream from Abigail Winslow’s apartment. There’s a reason for that:

That was how the book started in the original draft.

Ben’s childhood, his fear of ghosts, did not exist in that original rendition of the story. Even most of the second chapter didn’t, as the scream was the initial line in the book, and everything ran from there.

So where did the flashback scene come from and why keep it?

If you’ve read the book, you are no doubt aware of the role Ben’s father plays in the background. The big reveal at the end, where Cal Cooper has been seeing Ben’s father this whole time repeating the same phrase of “I’m sorry” over and over again doesn’t get the impact it deserves without the opening sequence.

Symmetry gets thrown around a lot when putting together a novel. Circling back to the beginning definitely strengthens a narrative on a thematic level. That was the reason behind the childhood flashback. Not only would it introduce Ben’s fear of ghosts, something he would have to face in the climax of the novel, but it also played on the dynamic between Ben and his father.

Kenneth Riley has been a figure mentioned briefly previously. This was a chance to build on that, and also foreshadow the revelations to come in Dark Impulses. Even Ben’s conversation with Cal in Chapter Sixteen doesn’t play the same without the flashback at the start of the novel, so that was why it came about and why it stayed.

“I’m sorry.”

I love this moment. It’s nice and ambiguous, leaving the reader to draw their own conclusions about what Kenneth is apologizing for. What has he done to his son that he now haunts him with nothing but regret?

The answers might be in Dark Impulses, or is there something more to it? I’m not saying anything on that front. You’ll have to wait and see.

The better opening

This is something I’ve been thinking about since revisiting the book for this commentary. Overall, I think the original opening focusing strictly on the scream and the situation was probably stronger. Could the flashback have been included somewhere else? Maybe while Ben is waiting for his coffee across from his apartment?

These are the kinds of questions that keep me up at night. I could second guess myself to death over every detail included, or erased, or revised, from the books, but then nothing would ever get published.

The flashback served a purpose and set the tone of the novel. That held its own importance, and I’m glad to have it in the book.

Next up: Cal Cooper!

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Writing Update – September 25, 2023

September 25, 2023 By Lou

I swear the Time Trapper is messing with me this year. There is no way another month has slipped by on the calendar. Once I make it through the Time Curtain, we’re having words, Trapper! Anyway you spin it, welcome to this month’s writing update–what there is of it, at any rate!

Writing Update

DSA Season Two LAUNCHED! Yes, the Wellspring is out in the world. Thank you to everyone who grabbed a copy and helped spread the word on the series. Much appreciated.

The launch has been fantastic. Conventions have really helped push the DSA back out into the world, so I hope to keep that momentum going.

This month, I’m closing out my final, final, FINAL? readthroughs of Books 5 and 6 of Season Two. I do this to figure out an accurate page count for the paperback so MiblArt can determine the necessary spine width for printing. It’s pretty much a straight readthrough, but I always manage to find a tweak or three for the narrative.

I’m also proofing Foundations for any last-minute issues with the book. There is one detail I think will enhance the season as a whole, so I’m glad I have the time to make it work.

Greystone 7

After a revisit to DSA, I’m diving into Greystone Book 7. October will be all drafting. I’ve read through the script a number of times, so the story is pretty much locked in my brain at this point. It should make things flow smoother as I navigate what might be my favorite Greystone adventure since The Gifts of Kali.

Okay, I love them all, but throw in some Arthurian legends? Knights of the Round Table? Prophecies of doom? Yeah, I’m all in. It’s going to be great.

Reading List

The Unwanted Prophet – I cannot say enough good things about this book. I loved every second of it. The narrative is enthralling, the characters are well-defined, and the dialogue is pitch perfect. Work fell to the wayside for this one. A fantastic read. Be sure to check it out.

Chaos and Consequences – I’m trying to branch out into the sci-fi/space war/empire genre, so reading is essential to figuring out the tone and pace readers enjoy. Nathan Doverspike’s inaugural novel was a great introduction into the world of Kai Stormbringer and the growing Aetherial War. The grittiness really helped generate the stakes for what is happening. Strong worldbuilding and dynamic characters. Check it out.

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The Wellspring Preview Chapter

September 5, 2023 By Lou

The Wellspring arrives next week! I can’t believe it is finally here. I’m so proud of how this season turned out. Some of my favorite DSA moments are in these six books.

Be sure to pre-order your digital copy of The Wellspring before the $0.99 sale ends on 9/15.

You can also order your paperback edition now!

To prepare for the launch next Wednesday, here is an exclusive preview chapter. Enjoy!

The Wellspring Preview Chapter

Glass shattered, scattering along the inside of the clinic. Morgan Dunleavy swiped at the remaining shards of the small window on the door to clear her path. Unfurling her hand from the inside of her sleeve, she reached inside to click the lock.

No alarms sounded as the door opened. No lights flashed at her arrival to signal local law enforcement of the break-in. Instead, silence greeted her. She scrambled back to the green compact. Desperate hands slipped from the handle on the first attempt before successfully opening the door. All breath left her at the sight of Ben Riley on the back seat.

Blood caked to his skin and seeped from open wounds. Crimson ran in thin streams along the upholstery. His chest rose with short, shallow breaths. His cheeks paled; everything about him faded to a ghostly white—like he was being erased.

“Come on, Ben,” Morgan muttered. She reached inside and pulled him to the edge of the seat before lifting him up. His arm draped over her shoulder, his feet dragged along the concrete, as she shuffled out of the rain and back into the shop.

She hadn’t been sure of his chances when she found him in the abandoned school. He’d been shot and beaten severely—hunted because of their association with the DSA. Greg Sullivan had perpetrated a coup and was cleaning up loose ends.

Morgan barely survived her own encounter. Jacob Grissom, the man who had recruited her—who’d given her a second chance at life—had betrayed them. He had been serving the enemy all along, forcing her to question every choice since.

With Ben, however, everything was crystal clear. She had resisted him early on, his constant need for conversation bordering on inane. Over time, he won her over—through his deeds and his unwavering perseverance to do the right thing.

She couldn’t lose him, not after he’d gone behind her back to protect her from harm. She wouldn’t let him go that easily. Not until she got in the last word with him, at the very least.

The Blairwood Pet Clinic was a last resort. Morgan had noticed the shop a dozen times in her travels of downtown Bethesda. Had she ever considered owning a pet, it might have been a place she would have visited. Just the thought of a pet, though, made her laugh. Like her life wasn’t complicated enough already.

The back room was little more than a supply closet. Cabinets of medications lined the right-hand wall. A double sink sat in the center of a counter to the left. Baskets hung on either side of the door, filled with combs, brushes and gloves, among other miscellaneous needs, depending on the day.

The cramped room opened to a narrow corridor. Three doors lined the left-hand wall. She stepped inside the first and saw the table within an examination room.

Carefully, Morgan lifted the dying man onto the table. Tremors shook Ben’s body with each movement. She had no choice. The timer had been ticking down the moment she’d found him, and she sensed the end approaching rapidly.

“You hang on, Ben,” she said. Her hand grazed his cheek and ran along his forehead. His fever was pronounced; heat coursed up her fingers at the merest touch. “I need you to hang on just a little longer for me. Please.”

She raced back to the supply closet. Cabinets ripped open without a care and bottles crashed to the floor to find what she needed. She grabbed at scissors and gauze, forceps, water, and alcohol. Her panicked thoughts tried to hold a mental list, but it was shunted aside with each ragged breath of the man in the examination room. Morgan filled a basket and tore it from the wall before hurrying back to her patient.

The basket clattered at her side. Snatching a pair of scissors, Morgan set about cutting loose Ben’s shirt. She peeled it back slowly to keep any pain to a minimum. There was no time for anesthetic, no time to even clean her instruments properly. Ben no longer had the luxury.

“No,” Morgan said, struggling through her own jaded perspective. Ben was a fighter and had been fighting ever since she’d met him. He made her better by standing at her side. She could do no less for him now. “You can do this, Ben. We can do this.”

The shirt pulled away to clear her view of the bullet wound along his right side. She pinched at the skin. Blood bubbled with each tweak. Lifting him for a look at his back, Morgan realized there was no exit wound.

“Dammit.” She tossed the scissors back into the basket and retrieved the forceps. “The bullet is still in there, Ben. This… this isn’t going to be pleasant. For either of us.”

The forceps wavered in her grip. Her fingers tightened along the handle, but hesitated to act. She had left her medical career behind long ago, lost because of a choice she’d made. Three men had died to save the life of her brother. Nothing could make her want to live that moment again, to make those choices between life and death with the consequences that followed. The pressure was too much. Ben’s condition, however, took all choice out of the matter.

She splashed alcohol on the instrument. Grabbing the painkillers found in the supply room, Morgan force fed them to her patient to bring down his fever. Ben’s arms and legs kicked out in violent spasms. Morgan did her best to lock him in position. Her hand rested on his chest. The soft beat of his heart comforted her in no small degree, like he was in the room with her to guide her hand.

The forceps slipped inside the open wound. Blood clouded everything, but she did her best to navigate within. Every movement was cautious and deliberately so. Adding further damage to any vital organs would end the man’s life in an instant.

Sweat ran in thick globs down her forehead and into her eyes. Her teeth dug into her lip, and her hand around the forceps tightened up instead of staying loose. Her body resisted her wishes with each rising doubt. This wasn’t who she was anymore. She had failed in that endeavor like she would Ben and everyone else.

Then she felt metal. Eyes widened in surprise, and all doubt vanished in an instant. Digging deep, maneuvering through the thick blood streaming from the open wound, Morgan snatched the bullet with the forceps and pulled it free.

It clattered to the ground.

“I did it,” she whispered, a smile on her lips. She dropped the tool in her grasp and reached for some hydrogen peroxide to disinfect the wound. “I did it, Ben. The bullet is out. I’m going to clean you up now. You have to do the rest, though. Come back to me, Ben.”

Her deed, however, wasn’t by any means a solution. Ben required more drugs to break the fever, as well as a transfusion from the blood loss. Both were out of her hands. All she could do was sew up the wound and cover it with gauze.

Finished, she wiped his brow with a towel. A sad smile grew upon her lips as she pictured Ben’s reaction to everything she had done. He was always quick with a joke. Morgan imagined it would be about her ratty hair or the bags under her eyes. Something meant to be complimentary, yet at the same time completely inappropriate. She needed to hear that from him now.

Settling at his side, she continued to run her hand through his hair. “I… I don’t have anything else to offer you but some damn prayers, and they’ve never been real good ones at that. Never worked for me. Not with my brother, my career, nothing. But you have them, partner, so you come back and stop being an ass about it.”

“Morgan.”

She fell back a step at the sound of her name. Optimism filled her at the prospect of where it came from, but quickly dissipated. Ben remained unconscious, dying before her. No, the name came from behind her from a shadow standing in the doorway.

Susan Metcalf waited with arms across her chest. She appeared soaked and exhausted. That happened when you spent hours burying the dead.

“How did you find us?” Morgan asked. The words were sharp with anger, something that always sparked with the woman who had been her boss.

“I followed you. I—” Metcalf stopped at the sight of Ben on the table. Her approach was hesitant, her hands falling to his side. “Is he—”

“I got the bullet out,” Morgan said. “Stemmed the bleeding, but his fever is still spiking. He’s dying.”

Metcalf’s hand fell on Morgan’s. “There’s nothing you can do for him now.”

Morgan pulled away. Her eyes thinned. “I have to try. I have to do something.” Morgan paced the length of the room, unable to look at the man who had wanted nothing more than her friendship—who wanted nothing more than to help people.

“You can,” Metcalf said. “Morgan, I need you to do something for me.”

Morgan stopped at the door. “What? What the hell are you talking about?”

“There’s a reason why everything has happened today.” Metcalf caught her thin gaze. “She’s called The Wellspring, and I need you to find her.”

The Wellspring arrives September 13th!

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DSA: A Recap and What to Look Forward To

August 28, 2023 By Lou

DSA Season Two is only weeks away from starting.  I thought this would be a good time to bring everyone up to speed on the series and what to look forward to in the coming six books.

DSA Season One Recap

Ben Riley, a Buffalo cop, tracked a thief to a strange home on Wex Avenue. When he entered, he discovered a massive installation inside, one leagues beyond the level of technology currently available in the world. Unfortunately, upon departing, Ben was unable to see it again as he failed to know the code required.

This innocuous-enough event changed everything for Ben. Because of what he had seen, forces sought to discredit him and even framed him for murder. Ben was railroaded for a crime he didn’t commit, earning a lengthy sentence.

Susan Metcalf, Director of the DSA, saved Ben from this fate and recruited him into the clandestine Department of Special Assignments–a group tasked with tracking down scientific anomalies throughout the country.

Before Ben can get acclimated to this new life, he is assigned a case that takes him to Bellbrook, Ohio. The entire town was a dead zone, and all seven thousand residents were missing. Along the way, Ben meets the rest of the DSA field team: Ruth Heller, Lincoln MacKenzie, and Morgan Dunleavy.

A strange individual named Howard Clevinger clued them into the situation in Bellbrook. A signal virus had turned the people of Bellbrook into trees. Directed against the town as a test by the mysterious Witness, the team barely managed to survive the harrowing change and in the process lost Ruth Heller.

The road so far continued with Promethean…

…and carried the team through Broken Loyalties in a series of adventures both haunting and terrifying.

In their travels:

Ben and Morgan met Henry Reed, a pyrokinetic capable of setting himself on fire.

Lincoln MacKenzie turned against the DSA in a desperate search for answers from the Witness.

Zac Modine started an extra-marital affair with Morgan Dunleavy.

Ben learned the truth about Jacob Grissom’s “demise” while in the midst of a ghost hunt with an attorney-turned-spectral advocate, Cal Cooper.

Howard Clevinger was revealed to be merely one of a number of clones, the worst of which was dubbed Thirteen. He nearly killed both Ben and Morgan with his chemical manipulations.

In the midst of all this, Gregory Sullivan slowly took over the DSA from within, while hunting for a secret that has been guiding worldwide innovation for over a century. A secret known only as The Wellspring.

And so much more…

Broken Loyalties changed everything…

The season finale destroyed the DSA as a team and an institution. Grissom returned from the dead, a genetic abomination and murdered Stephanie Atwater in his attempt to slaughter Morgan.

Susan Metcalf was forced to fake her death and has set up an emergency bunker as the team’s new base of operations.

Lincoln infiltrated Sullivan’s DSA only to die at the Director’s hand.

Zac revealed his affair with Morgan to his wife and lost everything in the process. He sided with Sullivan over the field team, afraid to lose the only thing left to him: his job.

And Ben? Ben faced the maniac behind the Henry Reed case, Connor Hendricks, and took two bullets in the ensuing fight. Morgan found him just as he lost consciousness, ready for the end.

And. Here. We. Go.

The full reveal of the Wellspring takes center stage in the opening book of Season Two. Not only does it wrap up Sullivan’s coup of the DSA, it propels every character forward through the entire season.

So what do you have to look forward to with the DSA?

Zac, alone and on the run, with a terrible secret locked inside him.

Metcalf’s secret history revealed at the absolute worst possible moment.

The return of Thirteen.

The Bellbrook Batch.

The truth behind who the Witness is and where he comes from.

Time travel. A missing persons case. A viral threat beyond imagining.

And that’s just the start.

It all begins on September 13th with The Wellspring.

Pre-order your copy now.

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The Bridge Author Commentary 6

August 3, 2023 By Lou

The author commentary for The Bridge continues! I almost forgot to include this little tidbit, but can’t leave this book behind without discussing the arrival of new agent, Abigail Winslow! Big time SPOILERS for not only The Bridge, but Spectral Advocate coming up!

Abigail Winslow – your new DSA agent

Full disclosure: Winslow’s chapter with Metcalf did not exist in the first draft of this book. There was no new agent. There was no paranoia about Stallworth and Sullivan recruiting agents instead of Metcalf. None of this was in the original outline or draft of the book.

Where did Abigail Winslow come from?

Her entire role grew out of the need for a victim in Spectral Advocate. How messed up is that?

I needed a dead body in Spectral to get the ball rolling on Ben’s adventure with Cal Cooper. For awhile, it was going to be someone only connected to Cal. The more I looked into it, though, the more it made no sense to leave Ben out of the mix. It’s his damn series, after all.

Realizing my error, I thought about his arc. Everything with Ben is about a lack of trust, that feeling of isolation and paranoia when it comes to everything happening around you. By having Abigail as the victim, someone new to the DSA but connected professionally to Ben, it opened the door for the later revelation of her position right across from his apartment and able to spy on him.

Unlocking her reason for being

Figuring out her death, and how it relates to Ben, made her introduction in The Bridge a necessity. I didn’t want this to be a throw-away character. I never want to include anyone that doesn’t impact the story in a meaningful way. Yes, there are little roles to be filled, but there has to be a reason behind each one.

Abigail’s own purpose grew from her death to impact not only Ben’s arc in Spectral, but Metcalf’s in The Bridge. By developing her intro with the Metcalf interview, we see how Sullivan is slowly taking over the DSA piece by piece, and how that helps further the divide between Metcalf and Zac when she sees him speaking to Sullivan.

None of that comes about without the Winslow intro here.

It was absolutely strange to write her intro AFTER her death, but that’s just the way the season unfolded for me.

Next time:

I’m closing out my time on The Bridge with a look at the bonus material included with the book: The Grissom File!

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Writing Update – July 31, 2023

July 31, 2023 By Lou

The writing update is back! I can’t believe I used to do these monthly. How the heck did that work? This house is way too crazy right now.

Writing Update

DSA

Getting back to the publishing side of the business was always going to be a challenge. There are so many different tasks to fulfill. None are extremely challenging but, holy hell, are they time-consuming. To start, I’ve been reading through all of Season Two for any last-minute tweaks needed. Cover design came next as the readthrough provided some thoughts on what should be part of the design.

From there, comes the formatting–both ebook and paperback formats. Uploading files, applying for the LCCN numbers from the Library of Congress, determining where the book is needed for beta readers. Getting the proof, reading the proof, making changes where necessary.

It’s been a bit of a time-suck on the work schedule.

I wouldn’t have it any other way. This is the job and I want to provide the best reading experience possible.

I’m finished with the first half of Season Two with all that fun. (Wait until you see the covers from MiblArt!)

Greystone

The script-level draft for Greystone Book Seven is finished! After hanging out at Nickel City last month, and talking with so many readers about the series, I was dying to jump into a new installment. There wasn’t even the usual learning curve when it came to diving back into Portents.

Book Seven opens with a really cool flashback to the War for Portents when the Heads of Cerberus are taking over the city and then jumps a year after those events. Lots of Arthurian legends and myths in this one. Lots of Myers snark and Loren screw-ups.

But what about Soriya? Will the series be the same without her?

Well, you’ll just have to read and find out.

Reading List

It’s been all comics for a bit. Reading the dialogue helps me with my own, or so I tell myself.

Lots of Spider-Man from the early 90s.

Batman: Eternal was a treat to read after so many years. The New 52 really did have some gems in the DC catalog. I hope I can say the same post-Dawn of DC.

I have a brief vacation in August. Hoping to binge a couple novels at that time. Fingers crossed on that one.

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