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The Long Journey of the DSA

June 4, 2019 By Lou

A friend once asked me how long it takes to write a book. When I told him the month’s long process involved he stared at me in disbelief. To him, writing was a simple matter. Put words on a page and hit the publish button.

Oh, to dream.

I do believe I move pretty quickly through the process. I like seeing a clear progression, hitting a certain goal, week by week until completion.

Then there’s the DSA.

In the beginning…

In 2014 I wrote a book called Hench. Someday you might read it. No one ever has. It was my first attempt at a humorous first-person heist novel. It’s the longest single work I’ve ever put together and took me seven months to craft.

Hench burned me out for a bit.

I saw how much time it took and realized I needed a fresh approach. During that time I was researching self-publishing, still unsure how and when to take the leap. I stumbled on a book called Write. Publish. Repeat. It was a great look at how to set a pace and put out a stream of fiction in serialized fashion.

I fell in love with the concept. Television has always been my go-to for entertainment. I love the weekly installment and the connective tissue required to build a season of stories. Cliffhangers, subplots, everything about the medium appeals to me as a writer.

I wanted to bring that to my writing.

Coming up with the DSA

In the fall of 2014, I started mapping out seasons of stories in an attempt to find the right match for my sensibilities. They started out small, little snippets of action followed by nothing. They went nowhere.

In October I stumbled on the DSA. I thought about every show I ever loved. From The X-Files to Babylon 5 and what was essential to each one. What made me come back week after week to view the next installment. I made a list and in the middle of my discovery phase the DSA poured out of me.

I spent the month building the organization, the format and the players involved. Every aspect had to have a purpose, every piece had to mean something to the overall structure.

By the end of the year I had my first episode completed. The Clearing. I built it exactly as a television show would. This was the pilot. It had to pop so there were explosions, a bigger threat, a bigger cast even. Every decision came from that place of how would I do it on the screen and how could I translate it to prose.

The next five books took all of 2015 to write. My second daughter was born in March so she can take some of the blame on that one, but most of it fell on me for not quite knowing how to manage the series as a whole. And for not understanding the narrative from start to finish.

Not completely.

Publication snag…

The DSA was meant to be my launching point as an author. After 15 months of drafting and editing, I was ready.

My publishing company was formed in January 2016. Eleven Ten Publishing. Named after my girls’ birthdays. During that process, the investment required to have an LLC, the DSA suddenly went from the top of my list to the bottom of my pile.

I didn’t have the capital to edit, format or designs covers for six books and I was unwilling to stagger releases. The intention was always to be a seasonal structure, to release timely in order to capitalize on reader excitement.

So the DSA went away…

2018

I finished A Circle of Shadows in March last year. It was a months-long battle to close out the first cycle of the Greystone Saga. I was proud of what I accomplished, proud of the story told.

And afraid of what came next.

I had ideas. Some new. Some older than dirt. Hench came up and was quickly put aside. (It’s soooo long!)

But I always knew what I wanted to see next.

I rewrote The Clearing in six days. It needed it, much as my mother keeps telling me how much she enjoyed the book the first time around. My style changed over the three year delay. My narrative instincts evolved (or so I like to think…)

So I set about cleaning up the work, making the season tighter with more connective tissue. And I started to see where things were going.

Before, back in 2015, I had the first season and the inkling of the season opener for the second. That was it. No grand plan. No idea where I was headed. So part of the rewriting process was to find those connections and plant the seeds in season one.

By the end of 2018, all six episodes were rewritten and all six episodes of season two were outlined.

Countdown to launch

My original launch window was June of this year. Well, as you may have noticed, I missed that one. My fault and I’ll tell you why.

I scripted all six books for season 2 in January. It wasn’t my intention. It just happened.

Then Soriya and Loren decided to pull me back to Portents for a few weeks after that for what will be Hammer and Anvil, the first in an unplanned Greystone-In-Training trilogy.

By the time I sat down to start my final edits on season 1 of DSA I was already six weeks behind schedule. Whoops…

It took three months but the hardest part is over. The books are drafted, edited, rewritten, edited again, and probably will be edited one more time come the end of July.

How long does it take to write a book? As long as it does. And as long as it takes to make a kick ass final product.

(I guarantee Hench would have taken longer…)

The DSA arrives this October! Get ready.

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A Call for Reviews – 2019 Edition

March 5, 2019 By Lou

There are certain things are difficult for me, tasks with which I struggle. Acquiring reviews for Greystone appears to be one of them!

I love my books. Yes, there was an enormous pain in producing them as all writers would attest, but they are my creative darlings and I am the better because of them. If I could, I would talk Greystone all day. From the setting to the characters, every nuance, every stray thought that’s been put into why certain things occur in the books and where we are heading with the second half.

I could talk for hours and if you know me that is a feat and a half.

But this isn’t about me. I can’t leave a review, much as I would love to, on my books. I need your help to make it happen.

Now last year I set some goals with reviews. I failed miserably.

My hope is this year will go better. Truly, I hope you are enjoying the story and want to share that with others. If you have read any of the novels, any of the box sets, please consider leaving a review today.

I am including a master link for each book. From there you will be able to click on any retailer of your choice to leave a review. I hope you will. They are crucial to building up the Greystone’s rep, as it were, and I would love to hear your thoughts.

Thank you.

Click on the links below and post your review!

Signs of Portents – https://books2read.com/u/b5MEwR 

Tales from Portents – https://books2read.com/u/49xOJp

The Greystone Saga Volume One – https://books2read.com/u/3nerW5

The Medusa Coin – https://books2read.com/u/mVZjPl

Pathways in the Dark – https://books2read.com/u/mvj6g2

The Greystone Saga Volume Two – https://books2read.com/u/47879E

A Circle of Shadows – https://books2read.com/u/bazYXx

 

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Multi-Tasking Projects

February 26, 2019 By Lou

Part of the joy of writing can be the immersive nature of the beast. Digging into a story, poring your way through research and developing logic and rules for your world. It’s absolutely a blast to build, to create, and thrive in the fiction.

It can also turn into a chore.

There is that fear. Time slips away when working on what can turn out to be a multi-year project. For all your building, the rules might go from enjoyment to confinement. So how to break out of your doldrums? How do you step back so you can return to appreciate your creations instead of harping on their faults?

Multi-tasking projects

Take that angst, that aggression, and put it toward a new endeavor. Maybe it isn’t writing a book. It could be building a website or copyediting for a commercial site. Use that creative need and keep working, just on something else.

Taking your mind off your long-term project isn’t a crime. Sometimes – and this tends to be more true than not – the work is better for it. Figuring out a new puzzle helps you crack the one you’ve left on your word processor for a day, a week, a month. Not forever. Merely a small amount to gain perspective that immersion tends to obscure in the process.

How to make time for both…

This is the tricky part and everyone will tackle this differently. Some writers have the full day (LUCKY) and can break it up by morning and afternoon.

If you’re like me and can only dream of a full eight to ten hours per days writing your heart out, then you have to be a little more creative – and way more flexible.

Create milestones. Make them small, maybe even weekly goals. Once you reach a certain point on one project you move onto the other tasks. I set up a weekly checklist. Once my writing goal is met I now have time for blogging, e-mail clean up, and the dozen other jobs I tend to push off until the last second.

In terms of multiple book projects, I break down the process by draft.

Outline, Script, Readthrough, Draft, Self-Editing (x3) and then Done.

Once I complete one step in that process I turn to another project. For the DSA Season 2 I outlined all six books first then went back to script each one in turn. In between scripts I continued to self-edit Season 1, using what I learned of where the story is heading to dictate certain changes to the narrative.

When all six scripts were done, I put Season 2 away to focus on completing Season 1 edits.

Don’t overwhelm your schedule

Multi-tasking projects, especially different series of books, can prove to be quite challenging. Your voice in the narrative might be different and switching between the projects can prove difficult and frustrating.

Know your limits and let them guide your schedule instead of burying yourself. Once you get overwhelmed it is tough to find your way back so that the work becomes enjoyable again.

I had a third series I was hoping to take on this year. An awesome project I can’t wait to dive into, but it required too much time to get off the ground. Hours I couldn’t possibly find unless it pulled me away from the DSA and Greystone. It’s tentatively scheduled for next year on the writing schedule.

Understand what you can handle and how it will affect your story. Then map it all out so you can find your way.

Get to it.

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End of Year Wrap Up 2018

December 20, 2018 By Lou

I won’t keep you. The holidays are upon is and the craziness is nestled at the heart of the Paduano household as well.

Thank you

It means a lot to have you here every week, reading these missives. I enjoy putting them out there, from the updates to the commentary and even the reading lists. It’s fun connecting with you and I hope to continue that next year.

A Goodbye to Greystone

I’ve done a few of these already but this really is the last time I’ll be talking about the series for some time. There was a sense of planning with the series that now that it is done, I’m slightly concerned about where things are heading. I certainly know what I’d like to do on multiple levels but not having Soriya and Loren at my side for the first time is a little strange.

I do have some short stories planned so maybe the break won’t be as long as I think.

What to expect in 2019

The steady flow of publishing was not quite as sustainable as I was hoping from a monetary aspect. My goal to crank out the DSA starting in the summer probably won’t be happening as a result.

I do have a plan to get these out to you. I think fans of Greystone and of my writing will enjoy the journey ahead for the characters. What form that takes, though, remains to be seen.

As for the blog? In order to maximize my output and make sure I’m hitting my deadlines I’m cutting the blog back to once a week for 2019. This will probably change once DSA heads your way. I like to talk about the books and always have plenty of interesting background details to throw at you about my process.

Plus it’s a nice change of pace writing-wise.

Wishing you and yours a happy holidays!

Take care of yourselves and enjoy the season!

Have a Happy New Year!

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A Circle of Shadows Commentary – Loss and Sacrifice

December 3, 2018 By Lou

The author commentary of A Circle of Shadows continues! SPOILERS AHEAD!

Theme in a larger sense…

I always hated this part of English Lit; determining the theme of a work. How do you summarize 300 plus pages into a single overall concept?

Now I can’t help but do it constantly. Much to my chagrin.

Big picture, Greystone has always been, to me, about good against evil. About standing for something, about being a light against the constant darkness. Loren and Soriya made up the light and with it they battled the shadows of Portents for the safety of all others.

Constant. Never yielding. No matter the menace. No matter the cost.

Loss and sacrifice.

Death holds meaning.

It has to, and I’ve done my best to exemplify this throughout the series. Soriya’s ruminations on death, on the concept of the afterlife as it ties to the ever-present Bypass, are constantly in the background of the stories. She is always wondering about coming back, about bringing people back, about righting the wrongs of those she’s lost over the years.

That need, those conversations early on in Signs of Portents and Tales from Portents, paved the way to the finale of this novel.

Soriya’s fear of death, that early memory of Gilgamesh taking the soul of the girl in the orphanage, made it clear this was a fight she needed to face.

And ultimately lose.

Not by surrendering and not by defeat. But by sacrificing herself for her ideals; for Portents.

For Loren more than anyone.

Killing a major character.

I didn’t want to shy away from this. I tried, Lord I tried, to change it. There are some terribly written hospital scenes buried somewhere in my recycle bin if you want the evidence.

Truth be told, I think death for Soriya was just another journey and she was willing to take it now more than ever.

She stopped the threat, survived the menace of the Heads of Cerberus, and had nothing left to give.

Loss and sacrifice. What Greystone means to me. For the greater good, sure, but for ourselves more than anything. The betterment of ourselves. Never out of fear but love.

When Soriya tosses the Greystone out to Loren, knowing the journey continues for him; knowing he will pick up the mantle and do the work she has since she was four, she lets go of the world with love in her heart and a smile on her face.

The way any of us would like to go.

So what happens next?

I want to tell you. Really, I do. But I won’t. There are clues in the books. Things Soriya has said herself about the Bypass and what lies beyond the veil.

Is Soriya’s story done?

What do you think?

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A Circle of Shadows Commentary – The Second Greystone

November 12, 2018 By Lou

The author commentary on A Circle of Shadows continues with a closer look at the Greystone! SPOILER WARNING ahead!

The evolution of the Greystone

For me, one of the great joys of the series has been the slow-burn reveal of the Greystone and the mysteries surrounding it.

Purpose is extremely important to the players in the story, especially Soriya and Mentor. They exist for a reason, even though that reason has not completely presented itself to them as of yet. It is why Mentor takes care to teach Soriya all those years in the Bypass Chamber. Why he pushes texts and lessons above all else.

To introduce patience. To give her the knowledge to seek out that purpose.

But the Greystone itself remains locked to them.

How a villain showed the way to A Circle of Shadows…

The initial draft of The Medusa Coin held no insight into the Greystone. The focus was on Erikson and his quest for immortality. Even Loren’s search for his wife’s killer was sidelined, offering a very standalone installment.

To the detriment of the series as a whole.

As editing took hold, as I saw a way to introduce Myers and this element of Soriya’s involvement the day Beth fell, I realized that added something personal to Loren.

But what about Soriya? What was important to her at this moment? That was the start of the out of control Greystone, the inkling that the merging of the two stones in Signs of Portents came with repercussions.

Understanding why opened the door to Erikson’s connection with Mentor and in turn his innate knowledge of the stone. And the other pieces…

Introducing the second stone

There is a clear line of thought from that moment in The Medusa Coin where Erikson announces the existence of the other stones to the arrival of Gabriel Jordan in A Circle of Shadows. Without one, the other would fall flat or need more explanation than necessary in what was shaping up to be an action-packed book already.

But with that information, that possibility of other stones, introduced in the previous novel, Gabe’s entry is seamless. Without question.

Gabe’s involvement in this book was one of the first pieces of the outline put together. How he manipulated the stone, his access to the power – how the pair were more in tune than Soriya ever was with this stone she’s carried since childhood – were very much set from the start. To me, it was a way of looking at the power from an outside perspective, but also seeing how it could be manipulated, compared to the teachings of Mentor.

What does this mean going forward?

I won’t spoil where things are headed. What I will say is that Loren’s story has closed for the moment. His big mystery was solved here. Was Soriya’s?

What is the Greystone exactly? What is it here for? How many other stones are there with bearers to match?

I hope you’ve pondered these questions as well. I know I have and I can’t wait to find the answers with you.

Thanks for reading.

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