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Manuscript Editing Interview Part 3

December 1, 2016 By Lou

Last month I sat down with my editor, Kristen Hamilton of Kristen Corrects Inc., to discuss her background and her process when it comes to manuscript editing. By “sat down” I, of course, mean e-mails were sent and emoticons dispatched in lieu of drinks at the local pub. Still, laughs ensued and I appreciate her helping me understand more about her process. You can find part one where we discussed Kristen’s secret origin here. Part two talked about the start of the editing process for Kristen. You can read it here.

I cannot stress how important editing is to the writing process. Especially Kristen’s work on Signs of Portents and the rest of the Greystone series.

(For brevity’s sake I’ve toned down my sarcastic follow up questions to focus on the good stuff. You’re welcome.)

You read for hours on any given day. Probably every day. How do you keep your eyes from crossing or completely blurring over when handling manuscripts all day for weeks?

When I first started doing a lot of editing on the computer, I would get frequent headaches from staring at the screen for too long. Those have long since gone away—I think I just had to get used to it. Occasionally I will print out a manuscript and edit the hard copy. I take frequent breaks from the computer, and I never push myself. If my eyes are tired, I know I’m done. It’s not worth it, risking leaving an error in an author’s manuscript. I know that their books are their babies, and they’re entrusting a lot of responsibility to me to make sure their manuscript is perfect before it goes out for publication.

Does your focus wander to that dreaded chore list? Or maybe an e-mail that needs to go out right after this next chapter?

As far as e-mails—yes, they can certainly get distracting. Recently I’ve been so busy that answering my e-mails each morning takes up a solid hour and a half. And just when I’m all caught up on e-mails, a new one pops up. That’s one of the difficult things about being self-employed: if I’m not answering e-mails, I’m not getting any new jobs! But if I answer e-mails all day, I’ll never get my current jobs done. It’s a double-edged sword. I’ve learned that sometimes it’s necessary just to close out of my e-mail so I can focus on my work!

What are your expectations from the people you work with on a project? What do you hope they take away from the experience?

I love authors who are engaged with the editing process—those who have completed and revised their manuscript, recruited beta readers, and made the changes to make their manuscript better with each revision. It shows me that they’re really committed to their book, which is refreshing—not every author puts that effort into their manuscripts. An editor, as an industry expert, will help bring insight to an author’s manuscript that others will not, but external opinions and feedback will definitely help.

I hope authors look at my edits and learn how to write better for future works. I just met one of my clients, Aubrey Moore, in person at the 2016 Boise Book Fest this past weekend. She said that getting your book edited isn’t just about correcting the grammar, typos, or punctuation errors…it’s about having a professional look at and correct your work and say, “Okay, to be a better writer, this is what you need to focus on….” When I get an author’s second book and see that their writing has improved, I know I’ve done my job well.

At the end of the editing process, when I give authors their manuscripts that are ready to be published, I always tell them to be sure to market their books—and I really hope they take my advice. I have edited so many great books over the years, but the authors don’t market them, nobody knows about them, and the books never sell. It’s sad, really.

Okay, fun stuff.

Coffee or tea? Also, how many cups to get you through the day?

Definitely coffee in the mornings. Usually I’m good with 1 cup, but sometimes I’ll go for a second one. I’ll have the occasional cup of tea in the evenings or during winter afternoons.

What are you reading for fun right now? 

I’m currently reading Stranger in a Strange Land by Robert A. Heinlein. I’m also planning to read The Lies of Locke Lamora by Scott Lynch this month. I’m in the middle of a bet between my brother-in-law and my friend about which of those books is better, and I have to have an answer by Thanksgiving. I am going on a cruise next month, and am planning to read The Woman in Cabin 10 by Ruth Ware—that one’s about someone who gets pushed overboard a cruise ship. (Yes, I’m really going to read that while on a cruise.)

What books are you looking forward to reading?

I have a HUGE list of books I want to read after that—Life of Pi and The Silent Wife are ones I’m more excited about.

Big events writers should be aware of going on now or in the near future?

There are usually writers’ conferences in every big city across the United States periodically throughout the year. I’d like to attend the Writer’s Digest Conference one August in New York City. Next month is National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo), which is where authors all over the nation support one another in writing an entire novel in one month. It’s a pretty lofty goal, but there have been some good books to come of it.

One piece of advice for writers looking for an editor right now? And for those still working on their manuscript?

For writers looking for an editor right now: do your research. Reach out to different editors, get sample edits from each, and make sure you like their editing style, as every editor’s is different. Make sure you’re protected with contracts that legally bind both of you to the editing agreement. Check out their previous work and spend some time talking with them about your project to see if it’s a good fit.

For writers who are still working on their manuscript: it’s never too early to reach out to an editor, especially if you want to expedite the editing process. Good editors will be booked out weeks or months in advance, and many will get you on their schedule in advance, giving you the opportunity to continue working on your manuscript as the date approaches. If you have time, revise your manuscript before you send it to an editor. You might further develop scenes to make them better, realize you explained something incorrectly, or catch other errors. Any revising is better than none at all!

I want to thank Kristen Hamilton of Kristen Corrects Inc. for sharing her process. More so I want to thank her for making my books readable but there isn’t enough room on the Internet for such a thing. (Plus she would edit the crap out of it, I’m sure.)

Find out more about Kristen and her wonderful work at her website.

Thanks for reading.

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Manuscript Editing Interview Part 2

November 28, 2016 By Lou

Last month I sat down with my editor, Kristen Hamilton of Kristen Corrects Inc., to discuss her background and her process when it comes to manuscript editing. By “sat down” I, of course, mean e-mails were sent and emoticons dispatched in lieu of drinks at the local pub. Still, laughs ensued and I appreciate her helping me understand more about her process. You can find part one where we discussed Kristen’s secret origin here.

I cannot stress how important editing is to the writing process. Especially Kristen’s work on Signs of Portents and the rest of the Greystone series.

(For brevity’s sake I’ve toned down my sarcastic follow up questions to focus on the good stuff. You’re welcome.)

When someone is looking to hire an editor, any editor, what questions should they be asking?

Besides rates and timelines, what are some areas writers need to be looking at before plunking down the coin for some top notch editing?

I have a ton of material on my website that talks about this specifically, because in the end, it doesn’t matter if authors choose me or another editor, as long as they choose a qualified one. Far too many times, authors have told me, “I paid another editor and he didn’t do anything” or “He just took my money and disappeared.”

The top pieces of advice I can give: (1) Ask the editor for an editing sample, (2) Be sure the editor uses contracts outlining the project, (3) Make sure the editor has a portfolio and testimonials, and (4) Check out the editor’s education or experience with editing books. A well-qualified editor will be able to meet all of these requirements. Rates are important to consider, too: You won’t find a good editor at a bottom-dollar price. If someone’s offering to edit your 80,000-word manuscript for $400, that’s a red flag.

Take us through your process with a manuscript.

A writer engages your services and sends over their masterpiece. What are your first steps with it?Does it depend on the services procured? Substantive editing versus line editing perhaps?

Starting a new manuscript is so exciting! My process changes with the type of editing (or manuscript review) service I’m doing on their manuscript, but no matter what, I always check the word count first. There have been a handful of times when the authors have been WAY off on their word count, which affects the time it will take me to edit it. I’m really serious about meeting deadlines with manuscripts, so I always check to make the word count is accurate so I can edit the manuscript in time.

Once word count is verified, I start reading! A manuscript review is always fun, because I get to read the book like normal, highlight certain passages to bring things to the author’s attention (what works or doesn’t work), and provide suggestions and feedback for improving areas of the manuscript that don’t work (anything from plot development to pacing to character arcs and much, much more). A substantive edit is challenging, as I need to address all issues in storyline, character development, writing voice and tone, and so on. This edit takes me the most time to complete, as it can be very in depth.

My favorite edits come last—line editing and proofreading. Line editing is fun because I get to look at the structure of sentences, improve readability and flow, and make sure everything is consistent in the manuscript. The final proofread is simple, as I’m only looking at surface errors including spelling, punctuation, grammar, etc., but it’s the most stressful because if I miss something, the author’s manuscript is being published with those errors in it. Yikes!

Do you ever look over a work and send it back, either to ask the writer to reconsider another service, something more involved with the manuscript or to let them know it’s not quite ready for editing? Or does every manuscript have merit and you take it as is to do the job at hand?

It does happen, from time to time, that I have to e-mail the author and say, “Hey, this editing service just won’t cut it.” I typically ask for an excerpt of the manuscript before I sign with a client (this also gives me an opportunity to do a sample edit, so the author can see my editing style and what I look for when editing), so thankfully, this rarely happens. I always feel so bad about coming back to the author with the news that they need a more in-depth editing service, even when their manuscript legitimately needs it. I don’t want them to think I’m just fishing for more work!

How close were you to sending Signs of Portents back to me and say “Come on, buddy. Really? Try again.”

Believe me, Lou, editing for Signs of Portents was not that bad. You can sometimes have a backward way of saying things, using the passive voice and sentence fragments, which is perfect for line editing (focusing on sentence structure). I’m in the beginning phases of editing Tales From Portents now, and I see the same things. I always try to keep your voice as original as possible and choose only to change things when absolutely necessary. It’s your personal writing style, but sometimes it doesn’t work well. But while the line edits can sometimes be heavy on your manuscripts, I have never been close to throwing the towel in. Believe me, your writing is a breath of fresh air compared to some others I have worked on!

Okay, masterpiece received. Your first steps taken. How do you prepare for the journey? You’ve read countless books over the years. How do you stay interested?

There are occasional manuscripts that I just can’t get into—but that’s usually indicative of a big-picture issue, such as too-slow pacing or an unclear plot. I can find the value in the vast majority of books I edit. Some I enjoy more than others (on a personal level), but I appreciate all of them on a professional level. I break my work up each day to get a certain amount of words done, which helps to keep me on track with some of the books that are harder for me to get into.

Now I know how I read when I self-edit. I take my time but it is all I do and all I focus on during that time. It’s the only way I can keep the details straight. Character appearances. Locations. Relationships. How do you manage all of that while working on multiple projects at any one time?

It’s just one of those things that comes naturally to me. I have people ask me all the time, “How can you read so many books at once?” and I ask them, “How can you not?” I typically work on 2 manuscripts at a time—this allows me to work on each manuscript a little bit each day so that things stay fresh in my mind. For variety, I work on 2 manuscripts at a time (as opposed to 1)—otherwise, reading the same book for 8 hours per day would really get tiring, no matter how good the book is! I generally read multiple books at once for fun, though. The most I’ve ever read at once is 12. It’s easy for me to keep the storylines separate, but progress on each is slow.

Part 3 is coming later this week. Don’t miss it. Lots of great advice from Kristen.

Thanks for reading.

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Manuscript Editing Interview Part 1

November 21, 2016 By Lou

Last month I sat down with my editor, Kristen Hamilton of Kristen Corrects Inc., to discuss her background and her process when it comes to manuscript editing. By “sat down” I, of course, mean e-mails were sent and emoticons dispatched in lieu of drinks at the local pub. Still, laughs ensued and I appreciate her helping me understand more about her role in the process.

I cannot stress how important editing is to the writing process. Especially Kristen’s work on Signs of Portents and the rest of the Greystone series.

(For brevity’s sake I’ve toned down my sarcastic follow up questions to focus on the good stuff. You’re welcome.)

What is your background?

I always knew I wanted to do something in the writing/editing industry. I attribute this to the long hours my mom spent reading with me—usually 3-4 hours each day. We started with picture books when I was an infant and worked our way up to chapter books, and I eventually went on to start reading full-length novels (Dean Koontz novels were and still are my favorites) when I was in fourth or fifth grade.

By age 11, I was reading college-level materials. Reading was something I was always good at, and it made me feel accomplished to see how much stronger my reading skills were than my classmates’, so I kept at it. I’ve always been an introvert—quiet and shy—so books became my world. Instead of playing on the playground at recess, I’d sit and read a book. After school, I’d read. I devoured everything I could get my hands on.

My confidence was further bolstered when my entire fourth grade class took a writing test, and I was the only one who passed. When I was in the ninth grade, the teacher made photocopies of an essay I had written to show the other students “how to write a proper essay.” Teachers constantly encouraged me, and being singled out like this gave me the enthusiasm to keep going.

How does one prepare to become an editor?

Originally my goal was to be a journalist, and to write for the newspaper. When I was in middle school and high school, I was on the school newspaper staff, but it was less than what I had anticipated it to be. I didn’t enjoy coming up with story ideas—I found it difficult and tedious. But when I had a rough draft—boy, that was fun, editing it and seeing what I could do to improve it. Once the words were already on paper, I excelled.

By the time college rolled around, I was still trying to pursue the path of being a writer, even though a small part of me knew it didn’t quite fit. I took creative writing workshops, but I enjoyed reading and critiquing others’ work much more than I did writing my own stories. It was here, as I watched the teacher critique others’ stories with the class, that I began to learn what to look for when editing—character development, plot arc, believability of dialogue…

How did you start out as an editor?

I was working in fast food all through college. In the spring of 2012, I snagged a job at a car dealership writing descriptions about the vehicles. I was so excited—this was the start of my writing career, I just knew it! But working in a cubicle wasn’t what I thought it was going to be. I didn’t enjoy the set 8-to-5 hours and there was never enough for me to do. In fact, I ended up writing the car descriptions so fast that I ran out of work. They transferred me to a department that needed some extra hands—accounting. (Did I mention I failed my college math classes?) I ended up being at the accounting department for 2 weeks before they laid me off. I had only been there for 6 months and felt like a huge failure.

So there I was, sitting on the couch, unemployed. My boyfriend (now husband) threw a book in my lap: Freelancing for Dummies. I had nothing better to do, so I read it.

Two days later, I started Kristen Corrects. I started out at Odesk, now Upwork. The wages there are pitiful and most of your competition is outsourced work—think places like India, the Philippines, etc. I only worked a few jobs to get a few pieces of work for my portfolio and some testimonials. Then I created www.kristencorrects.com. I built up my SEO rankings, so if you type in “manuscript editor” on Google, I come up on the first page. My career is developing now that I have a ton of return and word-of-mouth clients, which has given me a landslide of clientele. It’s been a lot of hard work, but I’m incredibly passionate about what I do.

Parts 2 and 3 of our chat is coming next week.

Thanks for reading.

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