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A Circle of Shadows Commentary – Standish’s Late Addition

December 10, 2018 By Lou

The end of the year is fast approaching and so is this author commentary on A Circle of Shadows! SPOILER WARNING ahead!

Robert Standish

I love a good foil for the hero. I really enjoy trying to find their polar opposite and build them up. For Greg Loren, there is no character more despised than Robert Standish. I needed someone able to push Loren’s buttons, someone able to do things so heinous (and get away with them) that the reader couldn’t help but hate.

A little history…

Standish was a one-off character, much like Pratchett who I wrote about last week. He was meant to be nothing more than a memory, something in the background as the reason for Loren’s removal from the force. When I finished Signs of Portents and realized Tales would be a prequel style collection, I had the opportunity to expand on those memories; to really dig into the Standish character and his relationship with Loren.

In Tales, readers were able to see their first meeting, realize they were partners for a time, and then see the partnership dissolve in explosive fashion with Resurrectionists. Arc completed. End of story.

Never say never

Standish wasn’t meant to be in A Circle of Shadows. Honest.

In the outline and first couple of scripts, the man in the shadows, the man manipulating Myers was Julian Harvey.

Why? Exactly. I had no clue as to the proper motivation behind such an act. It didn’t make sense. At all.

I thought about the Luminary. Maybe she fit the bill better but that didn’t feel right either. What did she stand to gain from it? Why would she care about Loren at all, her focus was always on the Greystone.

Who hated Loren enough to want to end his career? Who was motivated and greedy enough to blackmail others to do their dirty work?

Standish was the only man for the job.

How his role evolved.

At first, that was the end of his involvement. He was messing with Myers to bring down Loren. Easy peasy.

Yet it didn’t seem enough. Not for Standish. He wouldn’t settle for a small bit in the drama. He needed a big role. So as I was piecing together members of each organization–from the Heads of Cerberus to the Circle of Shadows and everyone in between, I decided to make him the middle man.

He was the one playing all sides against each other. The mass-manipulator. The grandstanding cheat of it all.

I loved the idea.

Lessons learned:

I’d say never let anything (or any character, in this case) go to waste. The truth of the matter is that while each book grew progressively easier to craft thanks to the characters established in prior installments, there is something to be said with serendipity. I have to believe fate plays a hand in things and that, while a master craftsman might see all the angles and swear to them from the start, I will never be quite that adept and hope above all things that the story makes itself known to me as we go along.

Sure as hell makes for a fun ride that way.

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Tales from Portents Connecting Factors

May 15, 2017 By Lou

The next several months will bring author commentaries on all six stories contained within the Tales from Portents collection. My hope is to offer insight into the decisions made in putting the project together and the challenges therein. It’s also fun to point out the little Easter eggs throughout. (I love that crap.) So, SPOILER WARNING is in effect for the duration.

My problem with short story collections…

I’ve always had a hangup when it comes to collections or anthologies. There seems to be a disconnect from the main series or even from the stories collected. And I get it, I do. Every story should stand on its own. There has to be enough meat in it or there is no point in telling the tale.

But I always wanted more from the collections I’ve read. A level of connective tissue that made even the shortest of stories feel bigger in scope.

That became one of my main goals with Tales from Portents.

Connecting factors.

Like the threads left throughout Signs of Portents there had to be points of connection between the short stories in Tales in order to make the work feel like a larger whole.

I took every opportunity to make sure they flowed and were natural connections instead of forced or contrived. Connecting the stories in Tales just for the sake of doing it wasn’t something I was too keen on, so I took care not to force anything on the reader.

Robert Standish.

The biggest thread sewn between tales in the collection centers on Robert Standish. He is mentioned a few times in Signs of Portents as the reason behind Loren’s fall from grace. His “big mistake” that he refers to throughout the narrative.

That made him my go-to guy for this collection.

His fingerprints are in three of the six tales, each one building the relationship between Standish and Loren so that when it explodes it is completely justified.

Following the thread.

It starts with Gremlins and the characters introduction. This piece set the tone for their relationship and everything that came after it. I wanted Standish to play counter to Loren’s feelings in the police department. Someone not highly skilled at the job but ambitious.

Ambitious to the point of criminal in some regards.

His views are vile, his motives unclean when viewed through the looking glass that is Loren. Standish, to Loren, is everything he stands against.

Which made his appearance in View from Above that much sweeter. Forcing them to be partners, showing Loren at his lowest with Standish smiling and joking by his side, was impossible to pass up.

And it wasn’t even in the original outline! The opportunity came to have Vlad arrested and it wasn’t meant to be anything more than that but adding the dynamic between Loren and Standish was too good to pass up. I think it really helped capture the moment in time on display for the story and acted as a perfect midpoint in the story of these two polar opposites.

Leading to Resurrectionists.

Standish and the events that led to Loren’s departure for Chicago were the basis of this story when plotting. Having the earlier moments, showing their troubled relationship from start to bloody finish allowed for maximum impact on delivery.

It also left the dangling thread of Rufus Mathers and his hatred for Loren on the table. Something that will be playing throughout the first cycle of the series.

Consequences.

Being able to build on events and then show the fallout speaks to the wider scope I was hoping to achieve with this collection. Having Standish not only show up for the brutal beatdown that occurs in Resurrectionists but also weave him through a number of tales and situations allows readers to connect on a deeper level (not that Standish will ever be accused of being deep) and understand the motivations of Loren’s actions in the end.

And the fallout that continues to occur because of them.

Next time –

A very special announcement later this week and then next week a look at Eyes in the Storm.

Thanks for reading.

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