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Writing Update – January 19, 2017

January 19, 2017 By Lou

I was hoping to really dig into this one and deliver some grade A sarcasm and topnotch witty remarks that are patented Lou material. Instead, my toddler decided to enter her quarterly scream-fest and I am too bleary eyed to think straight. So let’s get to the writing update!

(Then sleep. With my headphones blaring. In the car. Down the block.)

Writing Update!

writing update

The PROOFS are in. I’ve been hip deep in reading through Tales from Portents “one last time” this week. Why the quotes? Because I know there will be another readthrough. There is always one more readthrough.

I’d like to thank my lovely wife for joining me in this endeavor. She found two glaring issues with Resurrectionists that I have spent the last two hours repairing. If you noticed them, apologies all around! If not, then what the hell are you talking about?

The Medusa Coin self-edit is chugging along. SLOWLY. I think I’ve figured out my main issue with the narrative and the changes I’ve noted, on copious amounts of stickie notes running throughout my basement, are going to really ramp up the overall storyline.

I’m very excited to pull the book apart and really tear into some of the weaker sections. You’ll thank me for it, I promise.

One final thought on editing this go-around and yet another apology if it has bothered you as much as it does me now. Littering. The damn word is everywhere in my books. I can’t stand it now. I am editing that word out of my vocabulary for the foreseeable future. (UGH. Buy a Thesaurus jackass. Oh wait, it’s right there, littering the floor. Idiot.)

The Signs of Portents sale is going on now. 99 pennies will get you a brilliant copy of the first book in the Greystone series.

I started outlining a new project. (I KNOW. Just wait.) I was talking with my editor to line up our schedules for The Medusa Coin and we started chatting about future series. And I told her about what I’m thinking comes next.

Big mistake.

I’ve been outlining since. Character moments. Overarching themes. Specific threats. Connecting factors.

No details yet for you. But damn, is it going to be a helluva time.

Thanks for reading.

(WHAT? No reading recommendations? Sorry. Can’t hear you over the screaming toddler down the block. Next time.)

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The Road to Tales Sale Has Begun!

January 16, 2017 By Lou

Tales from Portents hits the shelves a month from tomorrow! What started as a single story meant to bridge Signs of Portents with The Medusa Coin turned into an incredible writing experience with characters and threats that make such an impact on the rest of the first cycle and beyond. So how should you prepare for Tales? How about a 99-cent sale for Signs of Portents?

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Get your copy today!

That’s right. The Signs of Portents 99-cent sale is on right now and will be for the next month in preparation for Tales from Portents! Now is the time to snag your digital copy of the first novel in the Greystone series. Coming from Resurrectionists? Don’t miss this opportunity to get in on the ground floor of the story of Detective Greg Loren and Soriya Greystone.

What people are saying about Signs of Portents:

“Signs of Portents is well crafted, down to the smallest detail.”

“The characters in the book were well developed and the story line was intriguing and definitely a page turner.”

“…this book had me hooked from the prologue.”

“I had a very hard time putting it down.”

“…highly immersive backstory about the protagonists and the city of Portents. Overall, I’d definitely recommend this book.”

Tales from Portents arrives February 17, 2017.

Prepare for the latest release by snagging your copy of Signs of Portents today! Only 99-cents!

And now what you’ve all been waiting for – HARDCORE… RETAILER LINKS!

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And for more reviews and retailer links check out:

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A Look Ahead at Greystone

January 9, 2017 By Lou

Every once in awhile there comes a point when the mental conversation that continuously swims in my brain needs to spill out on the page. Or in this case, the blog. I can keep things pretty straight most of the time, tucking little nuggets of information into posts and then keeping the sweet revelations for a later date.

This time I wanted to share what was ahead in the coming year and beyond.

Not only is my hope to whet your appetite so you’re as excited as I am for the upcoming collection, Tales from Portents, but also to add some accountability for myself. A little extra motivation to hit my deadlines (the earlier the better) won’t hurt and give me a roadmap to follow.

2017

February 17th – Tales from Portents. The first short story collection in the Greystone series. A prelude to the events of Signs of Portents, Tales was originally meant to serve one purpose: set up the events already depicted in Signs. As I plotted out the stories I wanted in the collection I realized that it could do much more than that.

It could act as a bridge between novels. Both thematically and in action. A project I was very nervous about publishing has become one of the most influential pieces of the puzzle for what is to come in the first cycle. Trust me, each story plays a part in what is coming.

September 8th – The Medusa Coin. The second full-length novel of the series and a story I have had kicking around my head since 2009. New characters are introduced and a great new threat as well. A few of them actually. When I originally wrote the outline there was a little trepidation.

The Medusa Coin stands as the midpoint for the first cycle of the series. Not only did it need to build on the first novel, there also had to be a path to the final chapter as well. Subplots from seeds planted in Signs start to form a bigger picture without losing sight of the main thrust of this standalone novel.

A tightrope act to be sure, but I think it will work out.

December 1st – Founder’s Day. Much like Resurrectionists, Founder’s Day is a novella offered ahead of the second short story collection. When developing the lineup for the next collection I thought back to Tales for inspiration and realized there were plenty of threads left to pull.

Including a direct sequel to Resurrectionists itself. If you haven’t read it yet, I won’t spoil it here. Suffice it say, Founder’s Day plays off the events witnessed in the novella with a heavy nod to the history of Portents laid out in Signs. The script came together beautifully and I am looking forward to drafting it once The Medusa Coin is set.

2018

February 9th – Pathways in the Dark. The second short story collection plays off the events of The Medusa Coin. It follows our leads directly from the threat posed and builds on the decisions made at the end. Each story stands alone but all connect to the larger framework of the first cycle.

Elements from all the previous books play a role in Pathways. Some of the tales within have been kicking around the old noodle for years so to finally see them come to life is a great feeling.

September 14th – A Circle of Shadows. I’ve been holding back this title for months, waiting to see if someone would ask me about its mention in Signs of Portents. Wondering if people noticed it sitting in the background when they read early iterations of Tales from Portents. This is the big finale to the first cycle.

Every time I close my eyes I see the pieces taking shape. I see each side of the conflict becoming more and more complex and developed. This won’t be like the first two full-length novels. This is bigger in scope and in cast.

There have been threats loose in Portents for longer than anyone has known.

And they are about to come to light.

Get ready.

Get excited. I know I am. Putting this series together (and laying the seeds for the next trilogy) has been one of the best things about the last year. (Don’t tell my kids that though…)

Thanks for reading.

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The Value of a Professional Cover

December 5, 2016 By Lou

This might sound obvious but it was almost the worst mistake I could have made. And I was very close to making it over and over again. Taking the cover design of my novels into my own hands.

What the hell do I know about cover design?

cover designNothing. I mean, I’ve looked at covers my whole life. Mostly covers to issues of Amazing Spider-Man laid across my bed for the best cover of the year competitions with my sister. (The good old days.) I know what I like when it comes to covers.

Does that make me an expert?

Hmmm. NO. Not even close. So when it came to putting together the cover for Signs of Portents why on earth would I think I could do it on my own? I spent a hefty sum getting the manuscript just the way I wanted it. Multiple revisions. Great editing.

Do potential readers see the interior of your novel first? Again, NO. They see the cover.

First impressions and all that…

cover designCovers sell. It really is that simple. No matter what people believe, if that cover doesn’t pop then few will look to the book description for a second chance to win them over. Hell, if that cover is pitch perfect for your audience they probably won’t even read the description.

Just ask my wife and The Mortal Instruments series by Cassandra Clare. She couldn’t tell me anything about the books she bought on a whim other than how pretty the covers were.

Professional or Amateur? Your choice.

Cover design is about more than whipping something together in your basement on the cheap. To believe that your words will win out over your substandard graphic design abilities is dangerous thinking.

To your bottom line.

Cover design is about telling the story behind your novel in a single image. What kind of book it is, who the target audience will be, everything wrapped in a nice package someone can see in their browser or passing by on a shelf at their local bookstore.

It has to pull the reader in. It has to connect to a reader. In seconds. Literally seconds. Every additional moment spent on a cover is another chance to pull them to the back cover blurb or, HOPEFULLY, to add it to their cart.

Choosing to go it alone to save some money on your production budget is a risky move. One that tends to lend credence to the belief that self-publishing is the land of amateurs – something no one in this business needs.

Things never thought of until they show up in front of you.

cover designThere is more involved in putting together a book cover than throwing an image and picking a kick ass font. Especially when a series of novels is part of the deal.

  • Consistency – Do they have the same look and feel? Do they follow a pattern? If one doesn’t it should break away from the rest for a reason, hopefully one to do with the story.
  • Branding – Your cover carries your name. It carries the image of who you are to the world. It should say something about the book but also about its author.

I know my books would never have felt complete or ready to share with the world without having my covers done professionally. Kit Foster Design made the book real for me. That image of Nathaniel Evans’ eyes haunted me for days.

And yes, my initial sketch and original attempts to handle it all myself had that image in mind for the cover. In my version, the black tower at the heart of the city was center with the eyes of Evans looming overhead. It looked so creepy in my head.

On paper?

It looked like a giant clown face with the black tower acting like a nose and the city a giant shit eating grin. Not very ominous at all.

I stopped trying to make my own covers after that. (You’re welcome.)

Thanks for reading.

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Goodreads Giveaway Ends Today

November 17, 2016 By Lou

Today marks the end of the Goodreads giveaway! A great experience watching people get excited at their chance to win a signed paperback copy of Signs of Portents. If you haven’t checked it out and entered yet do so now before the end of today.

Last Chance to Enter the Goodreads Giveaway!

Winners will be notified by November 23rd and I will be sending out the copies promptly. I can’t wait for the feedback from the winners. Definitely looking forward to bringing more people into the world of Greystone before next month’s release of Resurrectionists.

Signs of Portents Goodreads GiveawayFeel free to drop me a line, both through here, Goodreads and my Author Central page over at Amazon. I am always available to answer any questions about the books. No spoilers allowed though. (Everyone dies. Wait, no, that isn’t how it ends. Is it?)

This has been a lot of fun putting together. So much so that I think I’ll be doing it again come January for Tales from Portents. A nice treat leading up to its release on February 17th.

For those unable to wait for their copy feel free to snag a free preview of the novel at the link below.

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A short one for today. Only thirteen days left in November. And a lot of The Medusa Coin left to write.

Good luck all around!

Thanks for reading.

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Signs of Portents – Author Commentary Part 5

October 20, 2016 By Lou

I saved one of my favorite subjects from Signs of Portents for last. The villain of the story.

(Spoilers ahead.)

Villain Building.

Villain building is always a tough nut to crack. On some level there is a purity to just being evil. To being the killer. But there has to be a reason for it. Some layered discontent, some mental instability, something there to connect to the reader.

Villainous motivations.

Nathaniel Evans was a one note player in the drama. During the first draft he was the killer but there was nothing to his story other than the destruction of the city. As I went along, as pieces fell into place and the “signs” portion of the title made more sense to me on every level, I realized the why of it all.

Why Evans was the right choice for the villain in this novel. Why he was after what he was after. And even why each victim came into focus, giving me a little tease for what was coming in future books. (Did you wonder about that too? How a man dead for over one hundred years could stumble on the exact people he needed at the right time? Think about that.)

The tools at his disposal.

The question of the specific victims aside, their role in Evans rebuilding throughout the novel was something I went back and forth on. Did he take both of Decker’s hands or only one? What about Abigail Fortune’s eyes? Early drafts had it as both but as I went back and tweaked little details I realized how much more creepy the man could be with one mangled hand and one pristine.

The same was true for the eyes. Two crimson was on the nose. (Even my three year old daughter knows people with red eyes are evil. And if they have sharp teeth? Totally evil.) Having both eyes blue didn’t work either. Too mundane. But one of each?

villain building

The cover alone sold me on that idea.

Origin stories

The true history of Portents wasn’t fleshed out in the first draft and became confusing to the reader. It was a slow evolution through the editing process. But once it came it clicked into place nicely to help in my villain building. The William Rath story. The flashbacks to the Town Square. All of that came after the initial draft to help flesh out Evans. Each element was carefully placed. My fear for a long time was in over-complicating the plot. It is a fear I carry into every project because it takes away clarity and momentum in the climb to the climax.

And yes, the William Rath “story” wiping out the truth about Evans may have been a play on Jebediah Springfield from The Simpsons. It did occur to me when I went into revision mode. Who hasn’t been influenced by The Simpsons at this point?

Questions?

I think I’ve come to the end of my commentary on Signs of Portents. I love doing this kind of thing and can’t wait to share some of the craziness behind Tales from Portents in a few months. Until then, if you have any questions on Signs that I didn’t cover or that you were interested in learning more about feel free to contact me directly here. There is also the Facebook and Twitter pages that I stalk frequently as well. Goodreads also has a really cool Ask the Author feature that would be a great place to keep the conversation going.

Thanks for reading.

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